Tec, a brony, finds himself in Equestia and must now live in Equestia. He finds out more about himself in the process and learns that things may not always be exactly as they seem.
I really love this so far. I'm confused though. Do you have a prior story with Tec in it on another site? It seems like information about him is being presented as if we should already know...
4314114 Yes, and the fact that you gave absolutely no indication that he was a wizard before the fourth chapter, then it's all of a sudden an integral part of his life. It just seemed like I was missing backstory that I should have already read, as if I'm now reading a sequel. Not to say it's not an excellent sequel...It's just that it feels amiss.
4314219 This isn't my first story, my first successful one and my first one on this profile. I had a profile on this site before, but I lost my account info. I still only had one story on that profile, but once again that wasn't my first story either. I Roleplay a lot. I mean seriously a lot. GURPS, OWoD, NWoD, D'n'D, online, freestyle, you name it, I have probably at least heard of it, if not run at least one game. I created a lot of stories to go along with those games and a lot of characters for them as well. Not to mention the original fictions I tried to write.
4314384 Thank you. Once I have my editing done and my 6th chapter up I am going to start looking into your tales as well, if I haven't read some of them already.
Ooo! Random thought. At some point in time I will be posting up a AU Pony Fic called Ascension. It's going to be an Adventure fic primarily. Not HiE. Haven't decided on Anthro or not.
4314573 I just might. Ascension is going to be long... So is Tec in Equestria... I have to give this story a new name the one I have is just so... original
I do apologize for the long wait, I had, not only, the worst case of writer's block I have ever had, but also, some real life issues. I have gotten back to writing the next chapter.
that sad so what happen next chapter?
4236380 Patience grasshopper.
4244603 Thank you for pointing that out. I have rectified it now.
This is a really great story. I can't wait for the next chapter. Will it be soon?
4246856 I will try. I am trying to decide whether or not to break up the next part into multiple chapters.
4246889
Why not make a blog post asking your followers wether they want one large chapter or many small chapters?
4247955 That's the thing. The size of the chapters wouldn't change the detail that I would go in for each day would.
I am doing a mass edit on all of the chapters. I am fixing it so that there will be no more changing of Point of view at all.
4312406 As I said I am doing a mass edit of the chapters. Thank you for the compliments.
I really love this so far. I'm confused though. Do you have a prior story with Tec in it on another site? It seems like information about him is being presented as if we should already know...
4314012 No. I am going to reveal things as I go along. Though, what caused you to think that? Gidget?
4314114 Yes, and the fact that you gave absolutely no indication that he was a wizard before the fourth chapter, then it's all of a sudden an integral part of his life. It just seemed like I was missing backstory that I should have already read, as if I'm now reading a sequel. Not to say it's not an excellent sequel...It's just that it feels amiss.
4314114 P.S.: As far as first stories go, this blows mine out of the water.
4314219 This isn't my first story, my first successful one and my first one on this profile. I had a profile on this site before, but I lost my account info. I still only had one story on that profile, but once again that wasn't my first story either. I Roleplay a lot. I mean seriously a lot. GURPS, OWoD, NWoD, D'n'D, online, freestyle, you name it, I have probably at least heard of it, if not run at least one game. I created a lot of stories to go along with those games and a lot of characters for them as well. Not to mention the original fictions I tried to write.
4314303 Ah, I see. Well you are an excellent weaver of tales. Your grammar could use some work, but that's easily fixed with some light studying.
4314384 Thank you. Once I have my editing done and my 6th chapter up I am going to start looking into your tales as well, if I haven't read some of them already.
4314389 I thought you said in the blog that a lot of mine were in your read later list...or maybe that was Cydox. I can't remember.
4314401 No, probably Cydox my read later is practically empty. I only have stuff in my read later that I didn't want to favorite.
4314411 It amazes me how differently we all use that box.
4314439 It amazes me sometimes too.
Ooo! Random thought. At some point in time I will be posting up a AU Pony Fic called Ascension. It's going to be an Adventure fic primarily. Not HiE. Haven't decided on Anthro or not.
4314461 I think you should try doing a non-anthro, just to step out of your comfort zone a little, seeing as you've already done an anthro fic.
4314573 I just might. Ascension is going to be long... So is Tec in Equestria... I have to give this story a new name the one I have is just so... original
4314709 @ The Video: I giggled.
What abooooouuuuttt..... For a Spell(?)
4314820 Maybe... Maybe... I might just let people vote on it. I suck at coming up with names normally.
4314828 That would be cool.
4314911 Posted the voting up on a blog. New Name
Well its looks like he has the attributes of Twilight, Fluttershy and Pinkie Pie, curious
i think you sure wirte next chapter
I do apologize for the long wait, I had, not only, the worst case of writer's block I have ever had, but also, some real life issues. I have gotten back to writing the next chapter.
i blame on wirter block