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malletmann


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...Huh.

Not bad, but the beginning seemed a bit rushed.

Not that the introductions to these kinds of stories ever seem all that important to people.
;)

i like it when the tentacles are gentle and caring, a lot better in my opinion.

3963672 yea it just seems much better
Kinda wwishing I could get some action tho:applecry:

needs a sequel where she brings it home to meet the family.

Yessss...
this site needs more tentacles

3965090
Although I'm satisfied with the story as it is, I may add more to it if I feel the inspiration.

awwww! this was really cute! and funny, 'cause lightning dust got pregnant.

roflmao. Yeah, this was totally unexpected (the story being updated) and I love it.

Best of luck, stay healthy, and update soon!

-Sky66

See updated. :rainbowhuh::unsuresweetie::trixieshiftright:
Read new chapter. :rainbowkiss::rainbowlaugh::heart:

great you've given me another fetish not that I'm complaining thank you:twilightsmile::raritywink::rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss:

Well then.....
That happened.

I always wondered about seaponies!

Start felt slightly rushed, otherwise awesome! Thumbs up!!! :heart:

Oh that's funny. Poor Lightning Dust. :rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh:

'"AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAUUUUUUUUUUUGGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"' :rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh:

:rainbowhuh::rainbowderp::rainbowlaugh:←My emotions right now, as expressed through Dash.

And then there's an ad for Riptiders, whatever that is. :ajbemused:

The whole premise reminds me of a certain 3D porno involving an aquatic tentacle monster. ...though not the ending; the ending's definitely different.

Perhaps Lightening dust will learn her lesson after the wonderbolts incident while having to take care of her baby.

Pretty rare for people to use the country Singapore.

I always adore these types of stories. Consentacles are always the best to read about, it seems more... fulfilling then typical tentacle fetish stories, mmm mm mm~ :heart: Read the next chapter and uh... eh, I prefer this one as a stand alone.

Damn fine work dude. Damn fine work.

I don't suppose there's any fan art?

A few typos here and there, and a bit rushed, but overall pretty decent

Well I have come to the conclusion that clop is of the devil

SLZ

Poor Lightning.

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