...Huh.

Not bad, but the beginning seemed a bit rushed.

Not that the introductions to these kinds of stories ever seem all that important to people.
;)

i like it when the tentacles are gentle and caring, a lot better in my opinion.

3963672 yea it just seems much better
Kinda wwishing I could get some action tho

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Gentacles!

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needs a sequel where she brings it home to meet the family.

Yessss...
this site needs more tentacles

3965090 that would be great

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Although I'm satisfied with the story as it is, I may add more to it if I feel the inspiration.

great you've given me another fetish not that I'm complaining thank you

The whole premise reminds me of a certain 3D porno involving an aquatic tentacle monster. ...though not the ending; the ending's definitely different.

I always adore these types of stories. Consentacles are always the best to read about, it seems more... fulfilling then typical tentacle fetish stories, mmm mm mm~ Read the next chapter and uh... eh, I prefer this one as a stand alone.

Damn fine work dude. Damn fine work.

A few typos here and there, and a bit rushed, but overall pretty decent