Celestia is one creepy individual, to outside forces. Unfortunately, a Griffin spy finds out the hard way.
Our protagonist, Felix Thalberg, gets caught spying on Celestia in an important meeting with all other foreign forces except the Griffin empire. To avoid death, or mental prison, he chooses the third option that is a mystery to the ponies.
Will he survive?
Is this gonna be a creepy baby fetish thing like momma fluttershy
I'm not sure if I like where this is going
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I'm thinking more like a babysitting job where Spike is nice when others are around, but a hellspawn when it's just the babysitter, and Celestia knows it...
Hell, she probably taught him to do it
3950363 oh thank Luna wow my mind goes to some dark places
3950363 probably something like that, but not exactly. spike might babysit.
IT'S RAPING TIME!!!! no, but in all seriousness, I love it but cut out the swearing. ponies dont swear...
3951111 Griffins do. Pretty much every race except ponies curse in my headcannon. Eh, I think they banned cursing to begin with. Celestia is creepy, and so are the horse puns.
Good story and can I use this idea in a chapter of my story (currently in progress)
is he transformed into a baby pony, or a griffin baby, im not clear on that. (I prefer griffin baby)
3957035 he's transformed into a griffin baby, i dunno how you got confused with that.
griffins have beaks, ponies have mouths.
Post more chapters please
is it dead?
When's the next chapter
3950040 You mean Patty Cakes? *Shutters* Filing that one under creepypasta.
An interesting start but the second chapter was rushed and overall poorly executed.
"Slap a bitch" pfft. I love that.
I woulda went with mental prison
Still woulda went with 1000 year mental prison
i would chose this over the death pit (shudders)
I would love either mental prison or mystery option.
This is better than I thought it would be.
3972685 Technically ponies have muzzles.
The "Mystery Option" is hardly a punishment compared to the other two
Definitely mental prison, always wounded what being insane is like
3950363 y-your idea
4520383 now that i know what the punishment is, cna i habe a mix of both mental prison and death?