Sober Companion

Nurse Redheart has always wanted to help ponies, and help ponies she has! But when she's assigned to be the "sober companion" for Berry Punch, a mare with whom she has history, things might get a little more complicated than she expected.

Thanks to Flint Sparks for the idea and Auramane for some advice/prereading!

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Kill Joy

Kill Joy #1 · Feb 14th, 2014 · · · Chapter 1 ·

Ruby Berry Daiquiri Pinch
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now I need a mixed drink

keam

keam #2 · Feb 14th, 2014 · · · Chapter 1 ·

Oh, this is going to be soooo god! I have loved Berry Punch all since I read Forecast, and while I still haven't read a single story where I love Berry Punch more than I do in Forecast, this is looking really good!

keam

keam #3 · Feb 14th, 2014 · 2 · · Chapter 1 ·

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Your. Avatar. It precisely made my day!

Esle Ynopemos

Esle Ynopemos #4 · Feb 14th, 2014 · · · Chapter 1 ·

Interesting. I like the characterizations and contrasts of Redheart and Berry Punch so far. I'd like to see where this story goes.

Luna Secret Stallion

Luna Secret Stallion #5 · Feb 14th, 2014 · · · Chapter 1 ·

3945347 Mmm that looks good!

Khelben Arunsun

Khelben Arunsun #6 · Feb 16th, 2014 · · · Chapter 1 ·

I do happen to like "Berry gets help" stories, so I'm interested in seeing where this goes.

LDSocrates

LDSocrates #7 · Feb 16th, 2014 · · · Chapter 1 ·

I really like this premise, thought the golden rule of showing vs. telling needs some work. Would've liked to see their relationship and history unfold instead of having it outright explained. But still, I'll be tracking this one.