Yet another Mare Do Well aftermath story.
Two days after the Mare Do Well incident, Rainbow Dash is feeling pretty rotten about her friends and their actions. But hey, it’s no big deal. Sure she’s feeling betrayed, alone, depressed, forgotten, and all that jazz, but nothing’s going to come of it. Right?
I mean, it’s not like there’s some evil nightmare entity that feeds on pain and loneliness and uses these emotions to turn ponies into monsters…
...oh wait.
Page generated in 0.145 seconds
Total duration
921 users online
542,404 hits today, 2,205,040 yesterday
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
3936776
Pretty please?
very very please branch maybe
PLEEEEASE MAKE ANOTHER!
That's it?!? AW COME ON!!!!!
Hmm....i'll read this laterp, it seems interesting
Do it! Do it! Do it! Do it! Do it! Do it!
The fic's grammar could use a bit of fine polishing, but the story itself leaves the impact in which it set out to leave.
I commend you for the effort.
Please continue this! I want to see exactly how RD puts them in their place. That episode truly irritated me as they most certainly did not treat Rainbow with any degree of friendship or support. Teaching her a lesson? I'd damn well hit someone if they did something that low to me! I love all the mane 6, but the 5 excluding Dash were in the wrong there.
well as much as we like to make others feel as miserable as we do, one shouldn't make a deal with the devil or in this case nightmare. Anyways great Story
3936776 Someone did, but he ended up cancelling it
This is a really great story! While I don't care for stories that actually break up the mane 6, I do enjoy when they are forced to confront a serious problem amongst themselves that CAN lead to them disbanding...if that makes sense.
Curious...was this story the inspiration for your MDW Fallout story?
Also, I'd love if you did a sequel where she does unload her grievances on them and then we see if everything goes south or if they can retain their friendship.
Heh. Best pony knows what's what.
I agree with Violet Emblem X. A Nightmare Dash Fic would be AMAZING! And I know that someone did try to write a Nightmare Dash Fic and ended up cancelling it, which only makes me want one even more!
Im not so sure i get the ending, why did she NEARLY slam the door behind her? is she mad or something?
5433163
I agree with King of Kings. that being said, Do it! Make another fic! You know you want to...
5527401
Gee, I wonder...
Would be interesting to see an alternate version of this, yeah.
8940775
Then read the Nightmare of Dash or something like that. The same argument but without Luna interfering and Rainbow excepting the offer. Much more fun.
9551160
Yeah, that's the one.
I mean, when you think about it the other mane 6 do boast a lot.
5433163
I'll try to make a nightmare Dash fic.