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Another one of these fics eh? I so do love these fics!
My favorate type of fic! The human isn't immediately accepted and he is actually evil sounding!
3919038 You're not familiar with the Fable games then, I take it?
3919086 So I take it you liked it?
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Nope, I'm not
3919139 Then just google Jack of Blades.
3919135 I just finished Fable Anniverssary and Jack never pased on the mask. He was around when Albion was formed.
The closest there comes to passing it on, is an option to keep or destroy it.
this is ok kinda reminds me of Malideus but less funny but all in all i think its a good fic
3919253 Thank you. Just so you know I'm going to try and make the future chapters funier. This was really only to establish a baseline, and the next one might as well.
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so are you aiming for something like Malideus because i think your doing a good job
3919306 I'm actually hoping to get it somewhere between Malideus and F*** it, I'm Having Fun.
A little less serious than Malideus, and a little more serious than Having Fun
thanks i have not read F*** it, I'm Having Fun
let the story begin
3919322 You should go read it. It was the main reason I started this.
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Praise the sun
3919351 Indeed.
...
Nope, sorry.
Sticking an anti-brony jerk into Equestria can be amusing. Giving said jerk god-like powers...tends to make the story a lot less fun.
And making them decide they actually want to be evil? I'm sorry, how are we supposed to like this character?
Also - we're reading about a guy _dressed_ as a character, who has also somehow gained said characters abilities. We're _not_ reading about Jack of Blades in Equestria. Having your character 'become' Jack of Blades is, quite frankly, cheating. It's either HiE, or a Fable crossover, because, unless your main character is a completely normal person from Albion, one of those descriptions is false.
So, sorry, but no, I don't think this story is for me.
3919793 Some valid points made to be sure though a little hasty in giving up completely.
We need some uniqueness in the character not a copy of Jack himself. We'd be reading something else if that were the case. He just completely decides to be evil right off the bat and doesn't even consider the thought of returning home. Something to work on to be sure.
Holy SHIET! Its Jack of Blades!
Considering his appearance in Fable 1 the Lost Chapters, He has made a whole bandit camp capture the heroes mother, his sisters eyes cut out, and killed a while entire village which is smaller compared to Ponyville.
I await for more with a favorite.
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Ah, sorry, I didn't make it clear - I'm not reading this because after this one chapter, I hate the main character. If I thought it feasible that what we were reading was the tale of how a villain becomes known as such, and is then defeated, as told through the eyes of said villain, I might be able to justify continuing, if only to glory in the moments where everything starts going wrong for him. Even then, having to tolerate his manner for however long the story lasts... makes it debatable whether it'd be worth it.
The other flaws are tolerable, at least for a few chapters, but actually making me hate the main character? At the start of the story, before I've become invested and know any side-characters who might otherwise hold my interest?
Nah, cheers. Better luck next time.
Something I'm confused about.
Why did he decide to just turn into Jack of Blades? I mean, he was just a regular guy moments ago, and now he suddenly decides to be a villain. That kind of decision would take longer than just an absent-minded thought, or so I should think.
Still though, I'm curious to see just where this goes...
Great start. I"m curious about something. You said that you we're having trouble deciding what villain to use between two. So you flipped a coin and went with Jack. So i'm curious. Who was the other villain?
3920576 Relax, it' only for the faazand year ago setting he has them. I intend for him to (l)earn them after his escape from the prison Celestia put him in.
3921655 I see I failed in sending the pre-equestrian personality across. I was trying to pitch him as a very angry person, with a general attitude of 'Fuck it, I'll go along with this'.
3922047 Hmmm... it might have been that I didn't really read the finer details, or maybe your right and you didn't get the point across well enough. Either way, I'm interested...
3921957 That would be telling...
3922033
Oh dear, I really am bad at conveying my meaning today. My apologies for the confusion, and hopefully this clears everything up;
It is the actions and attitude of the main character that earn him my ire. Not only does he appear to be an unpleasant person, but his mannerisms - casual swearing and easy threats of physical violence - I find to be anathema.
It is for that reason alone that I abandon this story immediately - if the main character repulses me so, what have I to gain by continuing? What do you? My feedback would hardly be uncoloured by this opinion.
But it is, as I say, my opinion, and a minority one at that apparently, that you have happened upon a combination of characteristics that I find thoroughly detestable.
So, again - better luck next time.
3922153 Well, that's your decision. I'll leave you to it.
Oh my God, a crossover with Fable. Jack of Blades has found a new world to burn, eh? Well, guess I'll read it and see.
EDIT: Okay, so it looks like he's decided to act like Jack for absolutely no good reason, and is likely to slowly but surely become Jack in so doing.
Sweet. This is gonna be good.
It's obviously spotty as far as quality goes, but I really like rare crossovers.
3922467 That's the plan. Slowly lose who he was and eventually become Jack in full.
3922495 Why, thank you.
Jack of mother-fucking Blades.
An excellent edition to our growing genre! Well done!
3922153
Agreed. I can handle a bad guy being evil for the sake of power (e.g. assassinate the world leaders and threaten the populace) but this guy is just
I would recommend this story to you: Retired to Equestria
3923697 Thank you. I chose him because I've never seen a fic of him on here.
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Brilliant. So I take it the entire reason he started acting in this manner is from some level of corruption from the Alicorn Amulet?
3924080 Close. Instead of merely corrupting him, it is changing who he is on a fundamental level into Jack of Blades. But the anger was always there.
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Ahh. Will it eventually bind his soul to the mask in the same manner as the true Jack of Blades, or will I have to wait to find that bit out?
Welp! Equestria is fucked
Well, this is neat.
3924453
i hope he dies, just so he can possess them one by one. I'm just in love with the concept of Jack of Blades (and how he looks)
3924453 I haven't planned quite THAT far ahead, but we'll see.
3924660 My guy isn't anti-brony. He's anti-everything.
3924660 And has a 'no fool discrimination' clause.
3925007 I know. My previous comments were just a poor attempt at humor.
Now here is an interesting conundrum.
Who would actually win in a fight.
War or Jack of Blades?
PRAISE THE LAWD!
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3926638 More like his mask and the alicorn mulet mad their way to Earth somehow.
3926981 *sound of me laughing to death*
I- I'm sorry but- but when it spelled "alicorn mulet" I read it as "alicorn mullet" whereupon I imagined celestia and Luna with full grown ethereal mullets and celestia bestowing upon twilight the holy mullet power and I just fucking died