As the last Big Daddy left in all of Rapture, loneliness had become a constant companion of mine. No memories, no voice, not even a face that I could call my own. I thought it would be like this for my entire existence in Rapture... At least, until
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I think it's supposed to be chapter 34.
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And THAT is a major whoops.
Bright... when I saw this in my update box I felt like a kid at christmas
Also (partially) Blinded by the blind... oh the eye-rony
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AYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY
And then he will wear an eyepatch and call himself Big Boss.
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... Fair enough.
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AYYYYYYYYY
7439885 MY MAN I AM HAPPY TO SEE THIS NEW CHAPTER :D
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AS AM I... WHY ARE WE TALKING IN CAPITAL?
7439906 I'unno, cuz I'm happy :D I'm glad to see an update in this story, it's part of the reason I started writing on here
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Ah, that makes sense then. Welp, glad to be back to updating pal. ^~^
7439932 Same here :) Your work inspires me!
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This was actually the first story I read on this website. I was browsing for Bioshock fanfics, followed a link to this story and found that even though I find MLP to be kind of meh(I've watched many episodes with my niece), the fanfiction is pretty entertaining.
Thank God ! I thought this story died.
7439987 Yeah, I mainly got roped into the whole idea of MLP through fanfiction, this story was the second one I stumbled upon, the first being YHaY
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7439987 If these general tv arcs don't interest you in a show (its a pmv but does good covering the highlights of the show) then what will?!
7440078 Firestorm :o an admin on a pony rp server on gmod has that same name
7440080 Of course, My name > Other names i0.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/newsfeed/001/153/213/415.gif
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Yes! An update to one of my favorite stories on this site!
Just finished the new chapter and I remembered why I love this story so much. Your writing is clear and polished with very few errors to be seen. You provide extraordinary detail to the environment, allowing the readers to clearly picture in their minds the surroundings the characters find themselves in. Your characters have very believable development and motivation, each of which seems to change and adapt in very natural ways and never feel forced. And your ability to provide tension and keep the readers on the edge of their seats during action sequences is clearly displayed in this chapter.
There is very little to criticize about your talent as a writer. Seriously, this has to be one of the best stories on Fimfiction.
Wait a minute...
(Checks featured stories. Doesn't see this story, but sees story of gender-swapped Twilight Sparkle and Shining Armour getting it on.)
Fucking serious?
Damn! Also, has there been any new fan art?
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Wow. That is among the most well-thought out and elegantly written compliments I've ever been given about my writing... Like, ever.
Thanks. I really appreciate it.
As for the er... feature...
*Ahem*
No comment on that.
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Fan art? You mean like the drawings of the Anti-protocol subjects as they arise? Or, like, actual fan art about random scenes?
If it's the latter, I can't say I've really received any in a while.
If it's the former, Papa Bear, whom himself has held a major impact to the story later on, usually provides those drawings as they arrive.
7441930 Cool.
7441925 You're welcome Brightlight. Continue being awesome.
Hooray! It's great to see the new chapter for this. We've yet to see how extensive the damage to Omega's head is, a rivet through the eye socket has got to be horrific. How will this affect him and can it be healed or at least treated?
Gamma's odd tapping of is glass was interesting then. A habit? OCD? Can't wait to see it's significance and an explanation from Seidon about the Vitals. And if Gamma does join the crew, how will they get it through his thick skull that Ponies are not Splicers?
A great continuation and I really hope that another chapter comes out soon!
It LIIIIIIIVES!
I just updated my story for the first time in 4-5 months, so I can't judge.
Glad to see this back. Now I'm wondering how this will go.
As always I immensely enjoyed the newest glimpse into the trial Omega treks as he guides his charges through the decrepit halls of Rapture. I love the way you paint Rapture in a type of darkness that brings its full potential into view. Not only do you express the horrors so vividly, but you also capture the true emotions that are embedded in the tomb surrounding your characters. Its amazing to witness the changes our survivors make to adapt to such situations and how your story breaths life into their daunting trials. There is a fundamental growth and change as they creep through each corridor, the blaze of spirit during each encounter, and the passion they witness as they realize the true depravity of the denizens of Rapture. I must also commend you for the fact that your writing is so fluid and lacks the many grammatical errors that often draw away from such an art. Every time a new chapter is released I hop onto it with a ravenous hunger that always leaves me searching for more. Too often do I find myself playing Bioshock just to try and fill the void after a new chapters release. Please continue with this amazing tale and know that your work, time, and effort are greatly appreciated.
Honestly, this story kind of seems like it's stuck at the moment. It feels like they've been trying to get down to those escape rafts for ages. There's a lot of endless back and forth, but nothing that really goes anywhere. I've honestly kind of lost sight of the plot. The basic idea of "escape Rapture" is still there, but in the more immediate sense, the red string that the story used to have has kind of gone missing.
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Hm. It would seem so. Well, it's a rather minor mistake. But, hey, I can't blame the creator of the drawing for that, especially since he did such a good job on the rest of the piece.
I'm sure he, as well as I, appreciate you pointing this out though. Thank you. :D
7465526 shit
This keeps up and Omegas going to die just as he sees the girls to the exit
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I like to think that the story actually ended with chapter 13, and since then, the author has just been releasing more DLC.
7564703 Really?! Huh. I didn't know that.
dude it's been a month already
Jfc, Gamma is such a badass
He'll come out with a new chapter relax.....
I SWEAR TO BUCKING GODDESSES IF YOU DO-
CALM THE BUCK DOWN
7887032 well in the game, both 1 and 2, your character isn't a normal person when it comes to Adam and splicing, in 1 you were genetically engineered to not get messed up by adam, and in 2, the 'treatment' that turned you into a big daddy gave you a similar resistance...at the cost of most of your free will (but the near death experience brought most of that back)
Update next century?
GOD HAS FORSAKEN ME ;-;
Out of ALL the cliffhangers to leave off on WHY DO YOU PICK THIS OOOOONE!?!?
I need to know what happens next darn it.
Update when?
No pressure or anything, but pressure. Lots of pressure.
Oh come on the most important part of the story is at a cliff hanger of all cliff hangers.
Near the end of the first game for the third time and about to read this story for the second. Please update I like the uniqueness of it there are two maybe three that I have read and favorited that are this good.
Just finished the story again and hoping for a new chapter.
Update?
Update plz?
Please don't tell me this is abandoned...