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This story is a sequel to The Tragedy of Pinkie
This is a story about Pinkie's travels during the events of The Tragedy of Pinkie
It details a bit about Pinkie's life during this time, and tells a little bit about what she does. It includes ideas that I had for the original story, but that I cut for the sake of concision.
Though it's not necessary, I'd recommend reading The Tragedy before this story.
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The combo of stories are interesting but even though the event is not really supposed to be the focus all I can think about is "what caused everybody to disappear and why did Pinkie remain".
Yeah really what the fuck happened? is this like some stephen king scenario where everyone just vanishes and pinks is the only one left.
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I'm afraid this is one mystery that isn't meant to be solved!
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Very well i guess i shall move along then. An unsolved mystery makes for a good story so i hope to see more from ya.
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Clearly but the sad thing is that I think that it is overshadowing the character piece you have going here. The mystery is so compelling that it takes more of my imagination than Pinkie which should be my focus. It is especially noticeable because of your first story and how we know how it ends. Without the ending in that story I could allow myself to think more about Pinkie's feelings because I don't know what happens to Pinkie so I am more concerned with her progress to suicide.
I think this story works better longer and drawn out. Personally while I would not want Pinkie to kill herself I would show the story her doing so in a longer format where we can see her break little by little. At the same time the audience will keep thinking they are seeing clues (likely so will Pinkie) and you just keep looking for the changes in Pinkie's character.
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Very interesting opinions!
I'm not sure that the mystery overshadowing the character development is necessarily a bad thing, though. My original main goal for the fic was to portray a sense of helplessness and confusion: Perhaps something that many of the readers are feeling because of the open ended mystery, hmm? :P
I'm afraid that Pinkie finding any 'clues' simply wouldn't work, as there are no clues! There's absolutely nothing that Pinkie could do to discover more about what happened. I personally find that to be quiet horrific!
With more details given and the world expanded the picture becomes a little more clearer. I find this incredibly tragic now as Pinkie goes through her life wandering from place to place delivering letters and looking for answers... But she knows what happened in the end. Everyone simply vanished and she was the only one left. The world is filled with clues and things to keep her going for a long time, giving her some kind of purpose to her life. She finds a little content in her new world, but the happiness she had before would never be. Dream or not to imagine such a character so full of energy and life left in a 'dead' world, it truly breaks the heart the deeper you think about it. I stick by my personal dream explanation and smile at the thought of her waking up to the ponies of her world again.
But in any case this does make me want to hug someone... >.>
I would personally love to see this universe expanded, more of pinkies travels/ discoveries.
I give it a