• Member Since 20th Sep, 2012
  • offline last seen Feb 3rd, 2016

Gryphon Gaming


Just a YouTuber with likes of My Little Pony Friendship Is Magic

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I never really wanted to be popular. After bronies began to come out at my school, my world changed for ever. It was Will, I know he's different but I feel like... he's a hollow shadow....

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 6 )

Wow!!!! First: how you explain the guys and girls is amazing
Second: you must continue this journey bro!

Their are some spelling errors here and their and you need a space after each paragraph. Other than that its an interesting start to a story. At the end though I do get confused but I guess your supposed to.

3910705 "...here and their....their......their" So... spelling errors, eh?

3911303
I dont know how to use my "theirs" correctly. I Usually just use this "their" as my standard their's.

3911578 there is position "Over there."
their is for ownership "Their car"
and they're is a contraction of they are "They're going to the dance together."

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Thanks I just forget sometimes

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