• Member Since 22nd Oct, 2013
  • offline last seen Jul 12th, 2015

The System


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It all started that one day.

Celestia was given the box. His box.

The little wooden box with the eye on it.

He told Rose to give it to Celestia as a test.

She didn't last very long.

Now Shining Armor, Cadance, Celestia, and Luna have to keep Lord Zalgo inside their castle, until deemed safe for the public.

He's very bored.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 8 )

Did any of you know that it's- for some reason -comments that push me to work on my stories more. Just saying.

3973660 well I really like the story so far. :twilightsmile:

I've also checked the website for any other Zalgo stories, but I'm just the first.

Why not write bigger chapters and bigger paragraphs? And try adding a comment after a character says something like:

"I don't trust you!" Celestia exclaimed, a look of disbelief in her eyes.

Other than that, it's good. Go ahead.

3975599

Don't rush me, this is only my third story.

4060314

I searched this story, and it did not appear anywhere.

Either it was removed, did not exist, or something else, because I cannot find it.

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