Twilight discovers how to read books on a computer.
Also, my first fanfic :D
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Wow...I...what...huh...I don't know what I just read
3889021 What?
Where would I need quotation marks?
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ING PLACE A CHARACTER SPEAKS, that's where!
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Have you never read a book before?
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Really?
3889528
Umm have you ever read anything? There is literally no excuse for asking why
3889528
You are literate, aren't you?
I actually quite enjoyed this. It's a little rough, but your spelling is rather good, and you only need to get the hang of a few grammar rules. All in all, it was an enjoyable story. Best of luck!
3889565 Yes, I have read books. I'm also Swedish. And in Sweden, we have the minus signs infront of character speaking.
3889943 Thank you, I'll do my best to fix my grammar for my next story.
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Would you like an editor? I could give you a hand. I prefer dealing with grammar issues, and since your spelling is fairly good, this should be easy.
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In latin american literature, as well as some other nations, em dashes replace quotation marks. I honestly never would have used quotation marks for my first story if I hadn't lurked about for a bit.
3889989 Sure, you can help me on my next story if you want
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It's a deal, then! Send me a link to the chapter whenever you are ready, and I'll send back the revised version as soon as possible.
3890002 I'm actually planning on making the second one the sequel to this one, as its a different story, but I'll send it as soon as I can
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that's great
now utilize the english language correctly dammit
3897163 what?
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yes
I enjoyed this story. It was pretty out-of-character (OOC) and suffered immensely from Lavender Unicorn Syndrome (LUS), but was a short, silly read, and whatever issues the story contained weren't so detracting that it was unreadable.