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A New Lease on Life

When Air Force Pilot Jake Green dies after his plane crashes off the coast of Alaska he is granted a second chance at life. And being the brony that he is he jumps at the chance to be sent to Equestria. But how will he fare in his new life, will he be able to adjust to life in Ponyville or will everything come crashing down around him

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GuyFace

GuyFace #1 · Mar 26th, 2012 · · ·

Stop. Grammar time. I noticed your lack of question marks. Try inserting them at the ends of questions. Also, at one point, you wrote, "Wait who said that whose there?" First, pit a comma in between "Wait" and and "who". Then in between "that" and "whose". Lastly, it shouldn't be "whose", it should be "who's". I think that covers everything.

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