We've gotten through most of the main characters in play for this thing....
---Applejack, Twilight, Rainbow Dash (Asmodeus) ---Fluttershy (Macintosh) ---Vinyl Scratch and Octavia (no male, no problem ) ---Rarity (Spike) ---Princess Celestia and Princess Luna (Asmodeus)
I am definitely looking forward to both Fluttermac and OctaScratch, and yes, there is a pervy desire on my end for them as much as I loved Sparity. The reason? Both Fluttershy and Octavia seem to be as decidedly in the genre of "It's always the quiet ones" when it comes to sexual fulfillment and fantasy. In a related way, Spike's in the same genre because they are all hiding/resisting their natural urges for the sake of society or their loved ones, but boy---when they let it go, I bet they all REALLY let it go!!! Just like how Rarity was vastly surprised (and immensely pleasured) when Spike let out his "Bad Dragon" to play, I definitely think that both Mac and Vinyl are gonna be in for a hell of a surprise when "Mistress Shy" and "Octi Val Jean the mob princess" decide to join the afterparty.
And as a little bit of an aside, I kinda have to wonder where Pinkie is, but knowing Pinkie, I bet she has her ways to deal just fine---possibly because she's in the same place as Mr and Mrs. Cake. There has to be a reason why Pinkie's paying for room and board at Sugarcube Corner, and considering that it's that time of the year for all mares, it's a good thing that Pinkie has a stallion and a mare ready to take care of themselves. How else did Pound and Pumpkin come here in the first place?
39629603963234 thanks! 3963268 Little bit of a spoiler here, but not a big one so don;t worry. The Octascratch interlude (which I plan on starting today) will be kind of like the Sparity bit(edit: not as muchas I originally thought). But the Fluttermac is going to be my attempt at "making love" as it were, partially because I want to try my hand at writing it, and also so there is a variety of clop in this story, cause that never hurt anyone.
Now onto Pinkie, she is going to appear in Day 3, but I am on the fence about putting her in a clop scene. I can read clop about her fine, but writing it just feels weird to me for some reason. That being said, anything could happen. 3963668 I appreciate your help, as always. 39637693964456 Glad to know I'm doing something right.
minor spelling errors like teh, and eddorts instead of the and efforts these were before Twilight, Rainbow and Applejack were caught other than that great story as always orgasm spell
Asmodeus looked back up, “Oh, and a word of advice.” Big Mac raised an eyebrow. “You have a beautiful marefriend; treat her right and with respect--but I’m sure you know that already.” Big Mac nodded and the two turned to head back towards the table, but Asmodeus held up a hoof to block Big Mac: “But... a little harder never hurt anypony.”
Hmm....looks like Asmodeus is giving Big Macintosh the same advice that he gave Rarity the previous day: Allow your mate to be true to him/herself, and both he and his special somepony will never be apart ever again, in all bases: physically, emotionally, but especially sexually, passionately, intimately. Do this, and Big Mac will learn a whole new side of Fluttershy that she rarely shows to anypony, much less her coltfriend. And just like when Spike finally felt comfortable with allowing his natural draconic instincts to truly sexually dominate Rarity, it'll give both Macintosh and Fluttershy the courage to let their respective manes go down in a flurry of passion and sexual fluids.
As for Vinyl and Octavia, his advice for them? Go for it, don't leave anything left behind. Once you've done it, you will know the answer to their unspoken questions one way or another. (Of course, I've read the OctaScratch interlude, just wanted to comment here.)
While I love this story in general, I REALLY loved this particular chapter! Specifically, the way you handled the princesses. Clop aside (which was good by itself), it was good to see this side of Luna
This chapter is very good - like the others - however, it is positively riddled with spelling errors and formatting bugs. I am going to go out on a limb here and say that you wrote this on GDocs~? I can tell because you have mare's everywhere when you want mares - GDocs does this all the time.
BAHAHAHA that plan totally backfired on her but this was really really hot
We've gotten through most of the main characters in play for this thing....
---Applejack, Twilight, Rainbow Dash (Asmodeus)
---Fluttershy (Macintosh)
---Vinyl Scratch and Octavia (no male, no problem )
---Rarity (Spike)
---Princess Celestia and Princess Luna (Asmodeus)
I am definitely looking forward to both Fluttermac and OctaScratch, and yes, there is a pervy desire on my end for them as much as I loved Sparity. The reason? Both Fluttershy and Octavia seem to be as decidedly in the genre of "It's always the quiet ones" when it comes to sexual fulfillment and fantasy. In a related way, Spike's in the same genre because they are all hiding/resisting their natural urges for the sake of society or their loved ones, but boy---when they let it go, I bet they all REALLY let it go!!! Just like how Rarity was vastly surprised (and immensely pleasured) when Spike let out his "Bad Dragon" to play, I definitely think that both Mac and Vinyl are gonna be in for a hell of a surprise when "Mistress Shy" and "Octi Val Jean the mob princess" decide to join the afterparty.
And as a little bit of an aside, I kinda have to wonder where Pinkie is, but knowing Pinkie, I bet she has her ways to deal just fine---possibly because she's in the same place as Mr and Mrs. Cake. There has to be a reason why Pinkie's paying for room and board at Sugarcube Corner, and considering that it's that time of the year for all mares, it's a good thing that Pinkie has a stallion and a mare ready to take care of themselves. How else did Pound and Pumpkin come here in the first place?
I know short comments kinda suck, but this chapter was simply amazing, and quite fun to proof-read. Can't wait for more!
Dang.... that was hot!
That was unbelievable. Great job
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Little bit of a spoiler here, but not a big one so don;t worry. The Octascratch interlude (which I plan on starting today) will be kind of like the Sparity bit(edit: not as muchas I originally thought). But the Fluttermac is going to be my attempt at "making love" as it were, partially because I want to try my hand at writing it, and also so there is a variety of clop in this story, cause that never hurt anyone.
Now onto Pinkie, she is going to appear in Day 3, but I am on the fence about putting her in a clop scene. I can read clop about her fine, but writing it just feels weird to me for some reason. That being said, anything could happen.
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I appreciate your help, as always.
3963769 3964456
Glad to know I'm doing something right.
SATISFACTION!
minor spelling errors like teh, and eddorts instead of the and efforts these were before Twilight, Rainbow and Applejack were caught other than that great story as always orgasm spell
Wow! that's all I can say
I rather enjoyed that chapter!
Keep up the good work!!
Very good chapter. Can't wait to read more.
Hmm....looks like Asmodeus is giving Big Macintosh the same advice that he gave Rarity the previous day: Allow your mate to be true to him/herself, and both he and his special somepony will never be apart ever again, in all bases: physically, emotionally, but especially sexually, passionately, intimately. Do this, and Big Mac will learn a whole new side of Fluttershy that she rarely shows to anypony, much less her coltfriend. And just like when Spike finally felt comfortable with allowing his natural draconic instincts to truly sexually dominate Rarity, it'll give both Macintosh and Fluttershy the courage to let their respective manes go down in a flurry of passion and sexual fluids.
As for Vinyl and Octavia, his advice for them? Go for it, don't leave anything left behind. Once you've done it, you will know the answer to their unspoken questions one way or another. (Of course, I've read the OctaScratch interlude, just wanted to comment here.)
THAT.
FUCKING.
BUUUUURN!!!
There are a few typos in this chapter, but it was otherwise very good. Keep it up!
burn and clean up god i am suing you for busted guts
That's wasn't your best idea there Celestia!!
Awesome!
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I hold you accountable for the three Zeroes in my record for this quarter of my classes...
...but I hardly regret it
And I'm reminded of that fanfic-turned-Flash-comic again.
You win. You win all of the fucking internet,
I see what you did there.
Asmodeus should totally give Princess Mi Amore Cadenza (aka Candyass.) a crash course of love and relationships.
I was your 500th like how does it feel to have lots of likes my friend:says in nikoli accent from black ops
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So much rufflage!!!!!! Butler!
Butler: Sir?
More tissues!
Butler: Of course.
I love this because most of my kinks are in it! Can't wait to read the rest!
Holy hell these chapters are filled with so much cloppable content that they take forever to get through! ;) I love it!
While I love this story in general, I REALLY loved this particular chapter! Specifically, the way you handled the princesses. Clop aside (which was good by itself), it was good to see this side of Luna
You also sometimes put a semicolon instead of an apostrophe.
This chapter is very good - like the others - however, it is positively riddled with spelling errors and formatting bugs. I am going to go out on a limb here and say that you wrote this on GDocs~? I can tell because you have mare's everywhere when you want mares - GDocs does this all the time.
I shit you not that is the opening line to this song.
I don't know, what fetishes dies the author have?
Horns, eh? Been a while. Plus you actually lent a workable descriptive of how it worked, good job.