You wouldn't be what most ponies would call 'stable' in any sense of the word. Your life is in crumbles, everyone you loved has moved on or passed away, and you live in the past. Dealing with hardships has never really been your strong suit and with the death of the last of your family, you estrange yourself from those who want to help. They move on and you don't. There seems to be no getting to you, until a certain mare who has been through the same thing, trys to pull you out of the blue. Will you let her?
First attempt at writing a multi chapter sad story so let me know what you think in the comments and tell me what I can improve on. Thanks!
Chapters (3)
I love this so far! More, please?
I know what it feels like when a story doesn't get proper attention, but this is great - very well written and a good plot line - so I sincerely hope readers will be flocking to you soon. c:
3912357 Well I'm glad someone is enjoying this story. I wrote this as a way to have a creative outlet so I don't get burnt out on my other story. I might update this tomorrow or later on tonight if you really want an update. Thanks for commenting! :D
Ooh, drama! ;D
3924974 Sorry I didn't get this out when I said I would, I just got busy and couldn't find the time. I hope you liked the chapter though!
3924978 Oh, it's not a problem - I can hardly keep up with my stories. And I really liked it - they're all very in character and sound just like they should. ^_^
3924980 Good to hear :D
I'm not sure if I like reading 2nd person fiction...
Since this is your first time at second person, I don't recommend doing this because this is the hardest. The readers will have the most hardest time accepting that their at your mercy because the author might screw up. If you really want to do this, it's best that you should experiment it with one shots instead
Please, just limit to one. Having more than one exclamation or question mark isn't that good