It's a normal day in Canterlot, until Celestia receives a package. She opens it, goes to Luna, then all you-know-what breaks loose as the entire castle is pulled into a sibling rivalry
In response to a half-hour challenge posted in the School for New Writers, posted by Darklordclomp
Prompt was "What's a little rivalry between sisters?"
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This was excellent, Good Job on your assignment!
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Thank you
It's the first thing I've posted in what seems like forever, so to hear you say that is actually really cool
3873926 Keep up the good work
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Will do *salute*
I like this.
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I'm glad
I have to post. This caught my eye, and when I read this, it was just great. You know, a few people in the past say I like stories a bit to much. I believe I like this.
Good job.
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Means a lot to hear that. If I made a story that made you have to post, as you said, I believe I did my job, so thank you 
Thank you for that
I enjoyed reading your story! In fact, I featured it in a blog post of mine. It's not much, but I hope it'll get you a couple of extra views. Keep up the good work!
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Dude, that is awesome. Thank you so much
And who knows? Maybe I won't fall into another year-long slump of no writing
Lol. Finally got around to reading it. I like it.
Huh. Any reason the only blaster that's shown is the Maverick? No BBB, no LS, Xbow, Splitfire, BBBB, AT2K, not even the venerable Nite Finder?
Still a great story, it just struck me as odd that everypony had the same blaster.
(Nerfhaven is a
greatdecent place to find more info about the community that regularly has such blaster wars and also modifies their blasters, if anyone was interested)3906683
First person to mention Nerf, and an educational comment to boot. Thanks for the reference. If I ever write a sequel or a chapter 2 to this, I'll keep all those in mind
3907366 And/or message me, if you want a question answered without the hassle of searching. Here's hoping we see Next Week's War.
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Only time will tell