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OneLonelyPickle


Sometimes I write stories.

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WTF XD this is the best thing, ever this needs to be featured.

Fuckig awesome..... Needs more views, Cumments, and likes\Favorites.

What is even the hell

I couldn't even masturbate just... Jesus christ.

funnily enough I had the same idea to write a clop short with really colorful metaphors for shits and gigs

This needs a feature, a sequel, a like from me, and a favorite. Please make a sequel.

Ages of all three participants please.

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They have huge tits and Pinkie is mentioned to be living in Ponyville. I think that's rather explanatory enough. Why does it bother you so much? Think of them being any age you want if it upsets you so.

I would be more concerned about the sisters slutting around with farm boys and schoolchildren in their younger years as stated in this fic.

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Cause it was added to my group. My group has rules. I need to make sure of things.

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So I can make the assumption that your group is obviously against foalcon, right? Seems like a reason for needing to know their ages, just a guess of mine.

Reasonable enough. If you wanted to know, it does seem like they are mature enough/ aged appropriately if that helps.

3874609 Correct and thank you.

I want to have a sequel from the point where the chapter left off.

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Nah. I'd prefer a sequel where Pinkie takes her sisters to Ponyville and introduces them to a stallion for a... would it be 4 way or orgy? And preferably be one of the lesser used stallions. Maybe Thunderlane. Or if it had to be a more popular stallion, Soarin, just for all the pie puns he could use when enjoying his 3 delicious pies.

Also, the Artist who did the pic is tg-0. Originally had a link but then remembered his gallery has NSFW stuff.

“I’d say!” Old Man Pie said, his throbbing, foot-long shlong standing at attention. “Now, who wants to sit on daddy’s lap first?!”

RIP. DarkSonicTrail
Death By Laughter
1996 - 2014

3875004 Or Big Mac and Brae burn for a sexy five some filled with apple-pie

3875176 ....They never told us of the deadliest weapon of all.....one that we can see...but are helpless to stop......one that brings joy but pain if acted upon too long.....that weapon is...laughter..........Celestia help us all....

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Merci beaucoup :)

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Not sure to be honest. I kind of just rolled with it.

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I'd ask if you meant that in a good way, but not masturbating is never a good thing :/

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Sequel... perhaps one day :P A feature, well, that'd be nice, although I'd rather not become known for clopfics. I want to be an adventure fic writer.

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Old enough for you to have no qualms about wanting to fuck them savagely.

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That fic would go on forever, though: Old Man Pie can last longer than all three sisters cumbined :ajsmug:

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Ah, sank yoo. Truthfully I didn't even want to use the pic but a quick Google search got me that and one from the show where all three were in bed together smiling. Unfortunately, they were fillies in the pic, and Meester said dat was a no-no.

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Haha, thanks. I mentioned Old Man Pie earlier in the story and figured I might as well use that as set up for a funny ending scene.

3875572 Well? This sounds great! Give more!

seems like a good read.:twilightsheepish:

3876619 Care to leave an actual comment? Not particularly a fan of spam, myself :l

So, where's my hug?

3876754 Well where do you live :P? Depending on the distance I can be there within the next decade; if it's in town I'll catch the bus to you right now :D!

3876816 I dunno, lol. You have to tell me where. Otherwise, no hug :(

What's Sausage have to do with this?

3877539 Dunno, I've started playing Naruto recently, and at first the Sharingan creeped me the hell out, but now it looks awesome. Basically what happened with stories like these I suppose.

3877956 "Playing Naruto" :rainbowhuh: One of the video games y'mean? How does the Sharingan creep you out, haha?

3878060 Yup yup, Full Burst 3. And I've no idea honestly, it just did.

I usually dislike shipcest and incest clop, but from the description, I just couldn't resist. Was it worth breaking my usual 'no incest stuff' personal rule for? Well, I will answer that by saying this is definitely up their with my favorite clop fictions. Good job sir/madam.

P.s-all the way through I was wondering what would happen if their mom and dad caught them in the act.

“I’d say!” Old Man Pie said, his throbbing, foot-long shlong standing at attention. “Now, who wants to sit on daddy’s lap first?!”

that is their farther accounted for, in quite an amusing manner.

Ugh, the use of cheap jokes like 'ass'ault and 'embedded' (Especially with the presence of parentheses in the middle of the story), just really really irritated me.

And you seemed to go out of your way to be over-the-top ridiculously descriptive just threw me off-balance; good writing is more than how many synonyms you can use - even though it's good not to reuse a term too often, you were pushing them onto us.

And in general I didn't like how they were all portrayed as sex-addicts (all those casual colt-encounters), and the build-up to "incest" didn't seem that realistic - this story wasn't at all what I expected out of it, and the blatant, "father is okay with risking inbreeding to bed his daughters," just sealed my lack-of-approval.

I'm sorry if this comes across as too negative, I just cannot bring myself to like this story, but I think the idea could have had potential - and you do write well enough.

It's just the execution of the story that I take issue with.

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Ah. I've never played any of the Naruto games, but I watched the Game Grumps play one of them, and they look pretty fun :P Like Persona but with Naruto characters.

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Yeah, I'm not really a fan of incest or even lesbian sex to be honest. But I got the idea from someone, and as I wrote in the A/N, this fic was the result of trying to come up with something in 30 minutes, so I just rolled with it. Glad you liked it xD I am a sir, by the way.

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So basically, it's just not for you. That's okay; I can't please everyone. Glad you took the time to explain why (I assume) you disliked the story :pinkiesmile: I'll consider your complaints / suggestions the next time I decide to make a clop. I do want to make a more "serious" one sometime, so I hope that fic will be more to your liking. This was really more of a "just roll with it" kind of story. I'm not even into lesbian sex, hence why it all turned out goofier than you'd like a clop fic to be.

While I can't please everyone with one story, I can attempt to do so with several :P

3878841 They are pretty fun, you should try one if you ever get the chance.

It was good until the end with their dad.

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Hey we all read this story lolz:rainbowlaugh:

This needs a sequel including these three, Maude, and the parents.

4087174 Haha, it won't include Maude. I gave up on the show itself after season 3, so I have no idea what that pony is like. But sometime, eventually, I shall make a sequel of this, no worries (if you're patient that is :P).

Omg I love this are u going to continue the story by any chance:heart::heart:

4363819 Eventually. Maybe not a continuation PER SE but I will have those horny little Pie sisters screwing more ponies besides themselves. Ponies with cocks that is :trixieshiftleft::trixieshiftright:

You know, I actually feel more turned on by the fact that you used the SI (I know it's not TECHNICALLY, but I'm glad it's not Fahrenheit [did I even spell that correctly?]) Unit for Temperature

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