Pinkie pie assists a disembodied voice write about Twilight Walking-
Fllllyyyyyyinnnnggggg
... write about Twilight flying to pick up a cupcake at Sugar Cube Corner
Pinkie pie assists a disembodied voice write about Twilight Walking-
Fllllyyyyyyinnnnggggg
... write about Twilight flying to pick up a cupcake at Sugar Cube Corner
Great Zeus' beard! That was entertainment! That is how its done. Bravo! Bravo! Encore! (please)
Ha, that was random! You made my day.
Pffft. Yes. This is wunderbar.
I had a hard time not enjoying this story (I love meta antics, especially when they involve Pinkie Pie ), but I think you might wanna look into an editor (and no, I'm not talking about Pinkie). There were a lot of errors strewn throughout this story, especially in terms of capitalization. I don't know if this was intentional or not, but I'm banking on the latter.
Also, just one minor point:
If you're referring to the creature the Mane 6 fought in the episode Princess Twilight Sparkle, that's a cragodile. Not a rockodile.