Pressed Silver
written by ServingSpoon
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I don't know. This story strikes me as a bit of a mess, and I don't mean the interdimensional/emotional mess it seems to be intended as. The sentence and paragraph structures are a primary culprit, being strange where they aren't outright jarring.
The story has some solid points and concepts, but I can't give it an upvote while it's in this state. Sorry.
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Thats allright I know i am bad with grammar and i can't remember all the rules. i went over this at least 3 times to make sure it read to my satisfaction and tried to catch all I could.
it's okay if you dislike by the way I wrote it if that is your choice.
Personally I rate the story on how good the concept is as long as I can read it. but hey it's cool
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My dislikes are for bad stories.
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I have been doing.
Well I went over it again and I think I MIGHT have caught some of the stuff you were talking about. My forehead hurts from all the
it confuses me greatly.
3847135 (sighs) I don't see how I can make it any clearer. It's a paradoxical situation only instead of dealing with alt selves from another time we are deling with alt Diamond Tiaras and their Spoons.
Universe1: Diamond Tiara Riche The Third (anthro) has abandoned her pet slave; Silver "Serving" Spoon, and gone to college out of state.
Universe2: Diamond Dazzle Tiara (human, possible EQG,) has somehow visited Serving Spoon in universe 1 and replaces her original mistress.
Universe3: Chubby Diamond Tiara (Pony) was the one who orchestrated this meeting between Universe1 Silver and Universe 2 Diamond. She is not present for it but she sends pics of herself in bondage to taunt her human self and you will see why.
Mmmhmmm, this is a very interesting premise! I can't wait to see what else this project entails. Your work is, once again, so inspiring, I feel like a parasite just for reading it. Like some kind of brain lamprey. Not that I want to steal your ideas or anything! No, it's just some weird feeling between glee and guilt.^^
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right now.
Hay thanks so much there. I am hardcore
I am so glad you liked it.
Wait what
I didnt understand anything xDDD
It's so confusing