I'd love to know wtf happened between last chapter and this one; why keep the reader out of the loop? I imagine there's a good reason, but I'm still annoyed at the off-screen change in party members, and that it removed Best Pone from the party. Oh well, the Diamond Dogs' reactions to the ponies' cultural nudity will have to do. The whole situation with the Diamond Dogs is interesting enough to keep me wanting more, but their reactions are just perfect.
5150072 Son, I killed off Best Pone before the story began, I don't know what you're talking about.
But seriously, it's important the parties separate, and it's important I don't mention why yet. All I'll say is that not all the main characters are playing fair with each other right now. Secrets abound!
5324022 It'll be out pretty soon now, I think. Just one more short scene to write and then a couple rounds of editing. I don't make absolute deadlines anymore, but gimme about a week or less.
God damn it Trixie
Not suprised Trixie is still alive and kicking, but just what and who does she represent as a ambassador?
This line is great. not sure how someone would have this reaction, but it's hilarious. Also, you duplicated a paragraph near the end.
5083916 Yeah, I decided to add some. It reads better now.
5125630 Hmmm. Makes you wonder.
5125961 Thanks! And you're right, bit of a slip in my last round of editing. Thanks for that, too.
I'd love to know wtf happened between last chapter and this one; why keep the reader out of the loop? I imagine there's a good reason, but I'm still annoyed at the off-screen change in party members, and that it removed Best Pone from the party. Oh well, the Diamond Dogs' reactions to the ponies' cultural nudity will have to do. The whole situation with the Diamond Dogs is interesting enough to keep me wanting more, but their reactions are just perfect.
5150072 Son, I killed off Best Pone before the story began, I don't know what you're talking about.
But seriously, it's important the parties separate, and it's important I don't mention why yet. All I'll say is that not all the main characters are playing fair with each other right now. Secrets abound!
Yes! Trixie is in this story!
I looking forward to reading the next chapter when it comes out. If this fanfic still alive that is. it is still alive, yes-no?
5316707 It's still kicking, I'm just having a rough time with the current chapter I'm writing. Everybody's so high strung in it, lots to balance.
5323123
Oh, I see, I see. Well that's understandable, I guess. So how long will it take before a new chapter comes out?
5324022 It'll be out pretty soon now, I think. Just one more short scene to write and then a couple rounds of editing. I don't make absolute deadlines anymore, but gimme about a week or less.
5352502
Alright then. That is understandable. So I looked forward to reading it, when its done. Good things comes to those that wait, Yes-No?