Nick's life is turned upside-down as he lands in the middle of a dark plot to corrupt Equestria. With the help of his new-found pony friends he harnesses the powers of the Elements of Creation to save the day... because yes. Just another HiE story its my first, so any constructive criticism is welcome. Also this takes place before season 3... mostly.
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I rather enjoyed it. Good work on the description of the comet. Keep it up!
*First comment yay!*
Keep it coming. I eat up stories like this. :3
Awesome. Pure awesome. Keep up the work, bro!
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Infact... i like this story
Thanks for the feedback, I'll get started on the next chapter.
Moar...MOAR!!!!!
Not going to do it because your never going to update.
That 2263395
Makes no sense, I just updated it. I suggest getting your eyes checked my dear.
2263424 *Looks at the date of first chapter.
*Looks at the date of second chapter.
*Looks at the date of last comment.
*Looks at you.
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*26th of March, 2012
*13th of March, 2013
*1 minute, 45 seconds ago
If you weren't so busy looking at me then perhaps it would have been easier for you to find these dates, but nevertheless I supplied them for you since you were having trouble locating them yourself.
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*They're ONE YEAR apart.
*I lik ma convercacion wif da smert ess.
Sorry, meant to write mirror.
2263513 hes pointing out the fact that it took you more than a year just to add a tiny chapter
2263636 I know, I'm simply giving him a hard time because I don't see the point of him coming here and telling me about how he won't be contributing.
EDIT: Let the record show that it was not more than a year.
Contains descriptions of some wounds and blood now. I'm not describing entrails or anything, should I add the gore tag?
Decent chapter.
No, I don't think that you need the Gore tag for simple injuries.
Hmmm, good but the story progresses to fast withput any dialogue.
He said that without any talking, just stated.
But aside from that it's quite good
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Doesn't this mean he is talking? Or am I just confusing myself?
Also there will be more dialogue in future chapters, just trying to get Nick over the initial awkwardness of being tossed into a land of magical multicolored ponies.