• Member Since 17th Jan, 2014
  • offline last seen Jun 10th, 2014

Clockwork94


Just a guy from Peru who likes pc games and write few words in his free time. Because I'm practicing english, I require your help to improve my skills.

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"I can see a new world to be conquered. I can hear the guns blazing and the natives running. I can feel my heartbeat and the clockwork sword in my hand, guiding the imperium to a new dawn." A man in a officer suit is resting in his throne. His visions of glory may cause the extincion of a magical race. Meanwhile in Canterlot, Celestia is dreaming. But a grim shadow will transform her worst nightmare into a vision of a dark future...

Human forces inspired by the Vinci faction in Rise of Legends. Picture is similar to the Human cities.
Yes. Another story about humans in Equstria. But I added the steampunk touch to it.

UPDATE
Due to important appointments and some college studies, I will rewrite the story and make it more deeper. Sorry for make you wait until now.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 4 )

Very nice writing. I noticed a few mistakes but nothing that really interrupted my reading.

Just don't have Celestia attack the humans immediately (since she now knows what will happen).

Nice story but you need an editor, badly.

Rise Of Legends crossover? I must read this :rainbowdetermined2:

Also get an editor.

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