Mind Swap

by Little Wood

A New Problem for All

Twilight and her friends going to be on the next train to Canterlot. They waited a day and were excited to be back to their old selves. Everypony around them was whispering to each other, wondering if they were going to do something exciting like throw a party and crash one in the process. But they weren't. This was going to be even better.

Fluttershy was sitting down, writing another letter to Discord. Rainbow Dash and Pinkie Pie were planning a prank. Applejack and Rarity were discussing about the switch, leaving Twilight to sit and look out the window. Spike came along, too, but he was taking a nap.

What's going to happen in Canterlot? What will happen in the castle? I have a bad feeling about this, Twilight thought before trotting over to her friends. The train had just arrived in Canterlot when she was about to talk. She was having a bad day. She hoped it wouldn't get any worse.

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All the ponies trotted into the the enormous castle of Canterlot. Everypony was giggling, trying to hold their excitement in. They thought of going into Donut Joe's shop to celebrate right now, but they wanted their bodies back. So they were, of course, galloping to the throne room.

As soon as they entered the throne room, the princesses looked up. They galloped to the Elements of Harmony. "Let's go into another room. The griffon ambassador might come soon," Princess Celestia whispered to them. They nodded and followed the princesses quietly.

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When they walked inside the library, the Mane 6 were shaking with excitement. Celestia was preparing the spell. They didn't notice a shadow dash past them.

While they were frolicking about, Celestia and Luna were almost done to prepare the spell. "Please stop jumping, or else you'll be switched further," Luna scolded with a lame tone.

Right before the spell was done, a flash appeared as the spell carried on. Nopony seemed to notice it. Another flash occured, but was supposed to happen.

With the spell done, everypony looked around to see if they were back to normal. The shadow disappeared. Celestia looked to see herself and the Mane 6. Great. Luna is me I bet and now I'm Luna. Everypony started to panic, save the princesses.

"Stop! We must figure who is who now!" Luna yelled, with a hint of Celestia in her voice. Once they figured who was who, they calmed.

"We must hurry up and resolve this issue," Luna instructed. "But first," she started, trotting to the door, "let us get some food."

Author's Note:

Alright people. Here is the next chapter! This one I said would be great! Here is a list for you to find out who is who and what happened.
Twilight is Rarity. Rarity is Twilight.
Pinkie is Applejack. Applejack is Pinkie.
Rainbow Dash is Fluttershy. Flutter shy is Rainbow.
Princesses swapped too.

Now let me see what to do with this now!
Thanks to Ghost Balls, or Acriimony as I call him, to editing this chapter!
~Little Wood

Comments

[Knetexh]

Awwww yes! New chapter, haven't read it but am already excited

[PiMan]

This chapter is... kinda bad. You told me last chapter that your fourth wall break would be worth it for this chapter. It wasn't.
My guess is that you thought that it would be worth it because you were foreshadowing Discord's actions in this chapter, but you could have done that without the fourth wall break.

You've also got grammar and tense problems, particularly near the beginning.

As I said I would do last chapter if this one wasn't up to scratch, you've lost my favourite for this fic, and therefore a reader.

[Little Wood]

4058606 Well, I'm Sorry to hear that. But I cannot focus on what one wants, but what I have planned for others and what they like. And if you are trying 'Guilt Trip', nice try. I don't work that way. But thank you for reading.

[PiMan]

4059111
Guilting you was not my intent. Just telling that you've got at least one reader who doesn't like this fic and your writing style.
You don't have a huge readership, so I would guess that all genuine responses are useful, regardless of whether they are positive or critical, even if it doesn't noticeably impact the current fic. I just happen to be of the critical ones.

[Twilight_Scratch]

A new swap.