• Member Since 4th Mar, 2012
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Zaedes


I'm a brony. I usually am into programming and stuff, but fiction is cool too.

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After having nightmares about a mysterious crystal, Moon's Blade decides to investigate what's going on. After not too long he finds out about his fate and travels to Ponyville to seek the seven crystals that were once a machine of destruction and chaos, but it isn't an easy task as someone else tries to find the crystals for her own purposes...

My first fanfic of anything ever, please let me know how to improve myself. And mention errors. That too. Happy reading!

Chapters (16)
Comments ( 2 )

It seems like you put quite a lot of work into this.
I kinda liked it, the concept is somewhat new and not overused, and your OC isn't a big mary-sue either so I'll give you credit for that.
All in all its about a 4/5 from me, and I encourage you to continue writing :twilightsmile:

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