Just a mouse in a flower hat, talking about ponies.
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2nd person stories are so engaging.
Well done, endel. I found this very enjoyable. It is not a simple word I just used, I truly felt - the joy - of flight. I could question you on your choice of choosing a 2nd point of view, but I cannot come to terms on why I would, or why. I give this a thumbs up.
oh, and a follow.
In fact, saying I felt something to my core every time I finished a paragraph - all the way to the jubilant end, would be a gross misunderstanding. This was indeed a good end to my night.
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I'm glad that both of you liked it! I've been experimenting with different kinds of narrative styles recently, I'm ecstatic that it's paid off.