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Gods, I missed this. Now I have to read it all over again (Not that I mind)
Nice to see new chapters in this story! Hope there'll be more to come
I look forward to reading about Luna's party...
Please update this one more, it's a helluva funny story that needs more love.
Truly one of the greatest stories I've read, and I don't say it lightly. The plot is well spaced and the way Shane interacts with others feels natural. I can only hope that my words alone are enough to inspire you to write more of this captivating story, because it's truly one worth reading
Other species use magic, like real magic, besides unicorns? Huzzah! Sign me up! Finally, someone brave enough to give the rest of Equestria a fair chance at proving you don't need a horn to cast spells. That said, I have no idea how they do it; somatic, runes, maybe something tantric?
Yum, more glimpses into this Equestria.
Story update makes for a pleasant surprise.
And ooooh, that book! Perhaps Shane will encounter Doll again soon?
I didn't remember him knowing doll was a changling. If I can remember correctly.
6962012 True but she did change shape and was a black sort of pony. I wouldn't count this as too far off mark to break the illusion of the story. In his own words something about his description of her just didn't do her justice.
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He did see her in her natural form, which is what he recognized in the picture book. I was trying to allude to the idea that they had drawn changelings looking much more gruesome than they actually are. Think if you saw this, as an example of what a cat looked like. Also, she referred to herself as a changing.
Probably should have made that more clear. I may go back and add a bit to that scene.
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FWIW, this is exactly how I interpreted the situation. It's been a while since the last update, so there's bound to be a little fallout of memory.
Also: Twilight's line about caribou was absolutely hysterical and priceless.
Just finished reading through from the beginning and wow is this really good! It's a very believable world you've built out here and you do a fantastic job of filling in details while keeping things moving. I'm usually not a fan of off-protagonist interludes but each of them here have been complimentary to the main story and short enough not to be tedious. Shane seems to be an empathetic sort, I'll be curious to see how he deals with regulars while maintaining professional distance (or not).
Two notes! I did see some editing issues on my way through, particularly in the latter chapters. This one, Beer Run, seemed clean though. I, uh, failed to note them down, but if you'd like I could try and make a quick pass for them. Also, the main summary for the story seems to miss some important parts of what its about. Maybe I should have taken the 'M' tag more seriously but I was a little surprised when it became so sexually focused.
You don't, no matter the genre, once you set course be prepared for Adventure.
6970404 dat profile image doe....damn psycho slut
im just re-reading this because its actualy good and i hope you update it.. but i was thinking., if he cant do anything with magic. now that he knows the gryphons make moonshine from corn, he can probably make Corn ethanol. its really the same way as making moonshine and it should be good enough for the engine. just a thought :P