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I was hoping for blood.
Well, that's certainly one way to shut someone up.
Very cute scene.
to be about her
Sitting quietly as
Yep, pegasi are crazy. Might be why that's what I'd chose if sent to Equestria and told I needed to turn into a pony.
Also, why the sudden change from 1st to 3rd person? To show Winter's perspective?
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The "main" chapters are first person from Shane, intermission and filler chapters will be third. Lets me play with POV.
4592935 When I look at your profile photo, I feel like that was said in the most sarcastic way possible.
4593613 yeah I get a lot of that.
I'd forgotten about this fic for the longest time due to my settings constantly not saving when I check off the box that allows the Mature rated fics to come up on my fave or track listings.
But that just means that I have more that I can read in one sitting!
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Sexually transmitted infection. Std has been out of use for some time
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He was referring to having not yet been with a pony. Not sex in general.
4678645 fah-lay is my best attempted at phoneticly spelling filet.
4679645 More like fuh-lay. Or fil-lay.
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more like "depends on accent", der
the two most standard ways are fiˈlā and ˈfilā
4706580 I suppose that I'll eventually hear someone say 'foo-lay'.
i have read one chapter, and i want to know no more.
no... just no.
(i won't downvote it though)
Only the second Clopfic I've ever read, but I can't wait for the next chapter.
How much longer till next one! These are great! More energy then Gentlemen for Mares, but haven't got the same depth of character. All in all great story, on par with Gentlemen for Mares, for once.
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Probably a month out. I'm focusing on Stars Relit right now.
I have a lot in my head for HotRS. Canterlot is a vibrant city, so many places to go, so many things to explore. Shane's first client will be the chapter after next. The baron will be back eventually. Twilight is about to get word of Shane's presence, so she's going to have to come investigate.
4747638 You should work on this one, it is a real treasure in the sea of shit! An island of stability!
Well this story has been pretty sweet. Have to say, I'm loving a smaller cultural differences that keep getting brough up, and how the interactions between the ponies are set up/written.
I really hope to see more of this after you're through with your other stories.
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Thanks!
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Fair points. He is a passive character: "pants" if you will. It's the one thing that bugs me about this story. I hang a lampshade on it by saying he had already been here six months at the start of the story, and he got the bulk of the culture shock out of his system already. He's a bit broken and defeated when we meet him. I should have put a bit more focus on that part of him at the start of the story, but at the time I was going for a situational comedy.
Any hoo. I still have plans for this story. As soon as I get my current project out of my system, I'll be back to this.
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Shane really does seem too passive, you have that right. Him just up and going "okay!" when he is encouraged to work at a brothel, and his other job prospect is lost feels majorly lacking. While him being there is a major plot point, the problem is that how he reacts to it feels artificial. Given how in most modern cultures being a prostitute has major negative connotations, his blaise attitude towards it doesn't feel natural. While it may be a normal thing for ponies, all his life he's been accustomed to human social norms so one would expect certain reactions. Though if that was deliberate on your part it says some sad things about Shane's self-esteem and mental state, namely that they are in tatters.
I’m not sure why people complain about Shane’s “passive” nature. It seems like a perfectly sane survival strategy in a foreign culture.