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Somehow, some way, Rarity takes control of a story. With the infinite number of possibilities set before her because of this, she has only one thing in mind for how to change things. She wants to be the element of magic, not Twilight Sparkle. So, Rarity bends the fic to her command as we see what it would be like if Rarity took Twilight's place and threw everything off.


Thanks to Pageturner1988 for making the vector I used as a base for the page image.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 12 )

Interesting concept, giving Rarity the ability to break the fourth wall and interact with the author. There are a several spelling and punctuation errors, but nothing too serious. This story intrigues me, I will favorite it to see where it goes.

As Winston Churchill said, "KBO.":twilightsmile:

This looks like it will be very interesting!

Please write that story that you were "originally planning" after this story.

This story reminds me of My Little OPony: Twilight is Magic by cleverpun. Except instead of Rarity being the villain, she is the over-powered heroine.

Alright, I will bite:
Vinyl will probably be Laughter.
Fleur will probably be Generosity.
Braeburn will probably be Loyalty.
Lyra will probably be Kindness.
That leaves Fleetfoot as Honesty.
That is, if you plan to keep the elements the same.
This story makes me laugh, I look forward to more. KBO.:twilightsmile:

3762946 Very close, actually. Well done.

3756714 its meant to and also it pays respect to anthropology one if not the best story on fim fiction:moustache:

At least we know that in less than a year of the shows time Rarity will be a princess.

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The next chapter is Ticket Master. I look forward to it. KBO.:twilightsmile:

"...Course, Vinyl and Lyra are still loving into their house, but I’m sure they wouldn’t come either way.”

Perhaps you mean "moving?" Unless you are trying to ship them. Still, moving sounds better.

I would have been super pissed if Twilight would have been reduced to the role of Spike in this story. My waffle is NOT a Spike.:twilightangry2:

I look forward to reading your take on Applebuck Season.

KBO.:twilightsmile:

3973272 Thanks for the catch, though I think Vinyl would have preferred it the other way.

I think Twilight should been hired instead.

*grabs a bucket of popcorn* Welcome to the illustrious mop any of Alternate Bearers AU. I hope Rarity knows what she's doing. Once you change the past, you can't count on the future ever being the same. There will be consiquences.

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