This is a head cannon story! If you don't like those kinda stories then don't read! This is what, in my mind, happened with Celestia and Luna and how the Elements and Nightmare Moon came to be.
Salnalus helped me edit this, thank you! ^^
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Aww, I was hoping for a Frozen crossover. I love that movie.
Oh well, It still looks interesting.
3750833 It doesn't have to be a snowmare~
3750833 I was thinking of doing something like that, but for now it'll just be this one! Hope you liked it!!
3751186 Uh, thank you? I wasn't trying to make Celestia a douche, I was just trying to make something I've wanted to do in a long time. (Pretty much since I first saw the movie, seen it twice now) and I also know that the Nightmare Forces (Its explained in the comics more) are the reason for Luna becoming Nightmare Moon. Not Celestia.
But....yeah, thanks for liking it?
Okay, this was a pretty sweet little story.
I will admit, I haven't seen the movie, Frozen. So I actually had to look up the song on Youtube to get the idea. And I thought you captured it pretty well. I loved the beginning of the story. I don't know if that is how the story in the movie starts, because like I said, I haven't seen it. But from what I saw, it was sweet. It flowed well and it was so cute for the two sisters. I love when the chemistry between the two sisters is really well done. I love it when people show that Luna and Celestia are not enemies. They are friends and they are loving, caring sisters that would do anything for each other.
The nightmare forces was a nice nod to the comics. I've never read them, but I've heard about them. My biggest problem with this is... it's too short. I would have loved to see more of Celestia's side of the story as well. Why can't she be with Luna? I know that Celestia created the Elements, but I don't know why she can't be seen with Luna or spend time with her. I know that not a lot of that was shown in the original song. It was mostly told from one side, but at least we had some hint of why the one sister (I don't know their names) was locked in her room. Maybe it has something to do with her responsibilities, I don't know. Maybe I'm being to harsh on this, but it still bothers me.
There were a couple of grammar mistakes I saw, but nothing too serious. The story is simple, but a sweet little story. It matched the song pretty well and again, the relationship between the sisters is a nice change from the fighting that a lot of fans seem to put them through. Again, my only problem was that it was too short and it didn't really explain what Celestia was doing when Luna was trying to reach her. A nice sweet little story. Thank you for letting me read it and I will catch you later. Take care.
Such a sad story,but sweet at the same time.