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For a first Fimfic, this is pretty darn good. I looke forward to seeing more from this story.
And now I have tears. Well played, good sir. Fav'd and liked.
Thank you both. Episodes 1 and 2 will hopefully be up on Friday, unless something comes up.
Oh it's out! Sorry, I looked back at my PMs and realized I forgot to reply to you about the prologue!
It's ok Berry. I hope you enjoy it :)
Episode One is up everypony!
Can't wait for Ep 2!
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I second that.
Episode 2 is posted!
I like it, but I have a small complaint.
Sevulva says he is planning on taking over then because it was the anniversary of Anyonin's attempt. Didn't the legend say it happened on Hearth's Warming Eve? It just seems like no one is behaving as if it's Hearth's Warming, even WITH the dark stars.
I should have made it more clear, Roman. It was on the day that would become known as Hearths Warming when Antonin unleashed the dark stars upon the world. When Sevulva says that it's the anniversary, he states that it's the anniversary of when Antonin created the dark stars. He didn't create and unleash them on the same day for reasons that shall be revealed in future episodes.
Hey everypony, I'm gonna be rewriting episode 2. After re-reading it and getting some feedback I've realized that it didn't come out exactly as well as I wanted. It'll be the same, I'm just writing it over to make it sound better and flow well. Episode 3 will still be up by 6pm est on Friday as planned.
The revised Episode 2 is posted!
Episode 3 is up! Enjoy everypony!
So far, I'm liking it. I am quite fond of the fact that Terra is not a blithering idiot. He acts on sound suspicions of the evil force, and not being dumbstruck at every little thing. A desirable trait in a protagonist. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Yeah, Terra's definitely intelligent and does notice when something isn't quite right.
Very nice. A few things, though.
While it is a good chapter, I do not like it for the sole reason that Chupa used to ccut herself. Sorry.
Majus is not a filly, he is a colt. Young horses are called foals.
And it's spelled "rhododendron."
Sorry for nit-picking about the Chupa thing, but I just don't approve of someone suffering emotional damage. I don't understand it.
Episode 6 is finally up everypony! Have a happy Hearts and Hooves Day and enjoy a good story :)
3945109 mr. Review I would like to ask how you update your stories on fimfiction. Like how you write the first chapter and then update it to the second chapter
3974005 There's an option at the top next to edit that says "New Chapter".
Episode 07 is finally up everybody! Sorry for the wait, my power's been out all day.
Another great chapter. The Dinky bit made me happy, but I like how Agelian got some good characterization in.
And I wish Dennis there the best of luck.
Heard about this from my friend Dennis.
Yes, THAT Dennis.
You're doing well so far, better than what I can write, in my opinion. I may be biased, though.
3984299 Glad you're enjoying it
Episode 08 is up!
Yet another good chapter.
Episode 09 is up! Feedback is always appreciated :D
There is a possibility of the new episode being late. If that happens, I do apologize. Things just come up sometimes. I will still attempt to get it up on time, by 6pm tomorrow.
Episode 10 is up! YAY!
I just started reading these yesterday and couldn't stop. I can't wait until the next episode.
4088305 That's great to hear! I'm glad you're loving it
Episode 11 will be out on the 28th. I am taking this week off to give myself a little break before continuing. But Episode 11 will be a BIG episode, so be prepared ;)
Sorry for the week off. Episode 11 will be posted this Friday! :D
Episode 2 is great so far, but I could see a minor error in paragraph 8: "everypong" When Princess Aurora was introducing the "new" Mane 6, I suggest to remove an apostrophe at the end of the paragraph in which they were introed--like when after Briance Happer's, you should remove her paragraph's apostrophe, since the Princess was till talking. Long speeches or intros should all be like that. Well, I'm more like proofreading.Whatever happened to the Mane 6 who were missing NOT by death, I wish they made a surprise appearance.
4138008 For the three Mane 6 members who did not die, Fluttershy is around and has already been seen, Twilight mysteriously vanished with the other princesses, and Pinkie Pie ran away and hasn't been heard from or seen since.
Episode 11 is up!
Another great episode. Looking forward to the next one.
Episode 12 is up!
Another great episode. Even though I never really liked Trixie, wasn't expecting this. Didn't expect that from Devlin either. This went way too fast. Can't wait until the next episode.
Obviously Star Rider is the story's cover. Would there be a chance I/we could see the mane casts' pictures?
4207633 The avatars for every character in the story is at the following link http://mylittleponyfriendshipofgenerations.webs.com/
If you want better quality pictures for everyone (like the one for Star), there might be some in the future, but not right now.
The new chapter is being pushed back a week due to some things keeping me from getting it up in time this week. So the new episode will be published on the 18th instead of the 11th.
Great, just great Well, I gotta wait then
Just a couple more days until the new episode of MLP:FoG! And it's gonna be a doozy! There will be feels, awesomeness, excitement, fan service, and a surprise NO ONE will see coming!
Episode 13 is up!
Alrighty now....read it a few more times and after seeing that Turnabout Storm vid (tx SRX), I now have a better grasp on Lyra in this story. Much better this time. Can't wait for the next part.
OBJECTION!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Awesome! And you referenced Turnabout Storm, one of my favorite stories and videos!
4255026 What's the matter?
4255335 Yep