Rainbow Dash finds a maimed, unconscious young colt on the edge of Ponyville and rushes him to the hospital, but nopony knows who he is and something about him seems off...
A few month ago, Rainbow Dash found Twilight stargazing up on the balcony of Golden Oaks library. Ever since then she comes back, every night, and listens to Twilight's lectures on everything astronomy.
After finding a chess set in the library's storage closet, Twilight is eager to play a few games and turns to Applejack and Rainbow Dash. Teaching the two most competitive ponies in Ponyville a new game should be a snap, right? RIGHT?!
330725 We all need a little something to pick us up, right? Heh, glad I could help.
330915 Thanks. Also, as stupid as this may seem, I kinda suck at finding my own mistakes. If it's not too much trouble, could you send me a pm telling me where you found the break errors? I would thoroughly appreciate it if you could.
This story's description reminded me of myself , I tried to write a Fanfic, nobody liked it and I couldn't stop stressing over it. So I deleted it without even thinking. For some reason I regret it and don't regret it at the same time. But seriously I just wish I had good friends like RD.
331169 Ugh...too lazy. Just look over the site version (the read-only one) and you'll find them easily enough. Open another window with the editable version, and you're set.
Thank you for this story. It reminded me of times in the past where I've felt like Dash did here.
Short and sweet. I liked it. A few formatting issues where line breaks are concerned, but nothing a quick once-over can't fix. Nice job.
You're kidding right? as she finally saw the reality Dash let the lies of Twilight get to her and she became semi-self-centered again.
Well it's a kid's cartoon after all so I will shut up and retire what I said.
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Can't rightly say I understand the qualms you have with the story. But if that's how you feel, you're more than entitled to it.
Good story man, keep them up, I realyl liked this one. I don't know how to favourite, so I will just track it
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We all need a little something to pick us up, right? Heh, glad I could help.
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Thanks. Also, as stupid as this may seem, I kinda suck at finding my own mistakes. If it's not too much trouble, could you send me a pm telling me where you found the break errors? I would thoroughly appreciate it if you could.
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You click the star to the left of the story's title. And thanks!
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Thanks a bunch, loved the story, made me realise so much about my life...
This story's description reminded me of myself , I tried to write a Fanfic, nobody liked it and I couldn't stop stressing over it. So I deleted it without even thinking. For some reason I regret it and don't regret it at the same time. But seriously I just wish I had good friends like RD.
331169 Ugh...too lazy. Just look over the site version (the read-only one) and you'll find them easily enough. Open another window with the editable version, and you're set.
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Never thought of doing that. Thanks.