The Adventures Of Tom.

by Syliunt

Tom And The Race

Today was the running of the leaves and everypony was lined up at the Starting line with tom at the far right.

“3,2,1, GOOOOO” the anouncer shouted and everypony sprinted from the starting line except for Tom. Tom stayed still,
beacuse he was a rock. The ponys in the croud cheer the racers on realized this, well all but one of them did. Everypony left
Tom at the startingline except for Rarity. Rarity ran up to tom with a clear sense of love in her eyes.

she embraced Tom at the line and yelled out to all the world “I LOVE THIS PONY HE WILL BE MY HUSBAND!” But Tom did
not respond or react, for he was a rock. However her yelling had caused an avalanche crushing everypony in the race except
for tom. ”Tom sweety, this is your chance, go and win the race!” But tom didn’t move because Tom was a rock. That didn’t
matter though beacuse Rarity carried him all the way to the finish line causing tom to come in first place.
Tom did not care or have an oppinion on any of this, for he was a rock. When he won he heard that the ponies crushed by
rocks had been okay, and a tear rolled down his cheek. A tear, of joy, and a tear of accomplishment.

Comments

[lightningstorm]

"Tom was the running of the leaves"
besides paragraphing this was the only thing I noticed