After eating a strange fruit during the 7th Age of Piracy, Pinkamena Diane Pie decides to sail Equestria's seas in search of adventure.
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Feels... lacking. Something, I don't know. For an adventure story as great as OP, I also feel like there should be longer chapters.
But, also, there's not much to judge because there's so little content here. Maybe I can give an actual review when there's a few more chapters. Grammar/spelling is mostly okay. For now, I'm giving it a like, the first one, actually :P. Faved, too. Try to be original, and don't disappoint me.
3720724 Thanks for the like and fave.
About the lack of adventure, I did this on purpose because I wanted to explain Pinkie's origins, with this being an alternate universe and all. Don't worry, the adventure will come soon!
Write it how you feel, but like Shirohige said be origanal. I gave you a like and favorite, don't disappoint that favorite.
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Alright. Let's see how it goes.
Interesting. Was hoping for a different power- an original one- but still, interesting.
Also, very interesting -
Wanted implies that Luffy didn't succeed. So he died? Very interesting...
One more thing. Why does this lack the crossover tag? Not only are you using pirating, it's about devil fruits and adventure, and right there, you just blatantly referenced Luffy. I'm pretty sure this needs crossover tag.