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MajorFrostwing


Just want to write some good stories

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Lance runs a Dream analysis center in Canterlot. He takes ponies nightmares and gives them peace of mind though all it does is ruin his own dreams. When Luna comes into his dreams to help him he originally doesn't want her in his dreams. But as she continues to appear in his dreams to help him will he fall for her or just keep her around to help him sleep.

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 9 )

Just a question for all my next chapter is the finale should I continue it tell me if I should when you read it.

Okay, I'll say its not the best written story out there, you could use an editor to help you with some grammar issues, mainly run on sentences and a few mispelled words here and there, but it's far from unreadable and it's got my attention. i'll keep reading.

welll you can't end it here this isn'[t an ending.

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Hear hear! :flutterrage:

I get the lance part of his name now...

Just so everyone knows I will be making a second story right after this one continuing the story. The story is not over just yet :raritywink:

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and what do you mean you know the reason I would like to know how you came up with the reason
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Little grammatical stuff, but has a lot of potential, I shall read on

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I hope you enjoy the entirety of the story

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