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That's what happened throughout this. I really enjoyed the story! and the clop, of course! 
580222 Hooray! I made a guy masterbate! My life is so fucking complete!
Yeah, I don't know why the fuck I write this shit...
580240 I don't know why you write it. Do you enjoy that fact that you make others happy? Do you enjoy clop yourself? No-one but you knows why you write this. But hey, I am not complaining. I figure, do clop+romance+action+sadness+dark+comedy, and you get a great story! even the good 'ol 1-2 punch works! (clop+comedy)
That was definitely different. Not a whole lot to say outside that statement.
Hawt!!!
Well, the story was good and all, but I can't help but feel sympathy for Luna.
Why did Celestia have Luna take two guards at once? Wouldn't it have been better for Luna to take Blackberry instead while Celestia had Night and Regal? And Luna was basically forced into it.
589659 That's the point. She had to prove herself... lol
591790 I guess that makes sense.
605283 What!?
>>dat-flank
Meant to click this one
I love you and your story, don't be sad
608637 LOL Hooray!
So Luna had been around for five hundred years before she was imprisoned, but knew nothing about sex, masturbation or even basic anatomy? Kind of a big plot hole there, and not the good kind. A thousand years alone on the moon is more than long enough for even the most niaeve of ponies to discover that touching yourself feels good.
624319 that's a good argument bro, but it more depends on how you view the story. I see an alicorns lifespan lasting much longer than normal. By that I mean that when an alicorns is 400, it may be as though a pony is 10. Then when luna was trapped on the moon, I don't think she lived on the moon, but was imprisoned inside it. Not living nor dead.
626481 It is unlikely that they grow up that slowly. She would have been unable to even talk for the most part of the time that she was controlling the moon and the night for however long after the sisters beat Discord. And Cadence was shown as a teenager in Twilight's flashback to when she was being foalsat as a filly. I estimate that Twilight was 4-6 in that flashback, and that she was ten when she got her cutie mark, and it has been ten years since then, it has been around 15 years since then. If you assume Cadence was 15 in the flashback, then she would be thirty now, and getting married to Shining Armour, implying that she knows full well what sex is and despite being an alicorn matures at the same rate as a normal pony.
628831 Then again we are bringing logic into a show that says a pony can live over a 1000 years and not grow or age at all so...
629083 Doctor Who's main character is an alien that is over a thousand years old and can regenerate himself if he is close to death, and travels trough time and space in a police box that's bigger on the inside, and they still make it make sense. I'll just pretend that being turned into Nightmare Moon somehow affected Luna's memory. (and gave her her hymen back)
Lots and lots of typos, which kept me from "enjoying" it to it's fullest potential. Also, I kind of missed the part where Luna's hooves came untied from the bed, and she was able to reach down to touch her clitoris, or push the stallion off of her.
Not bad, could be better.
is this by any chance include Celestia X Luna shipping?
Will there be more?
so i ask again:
is this by any chance include Celestia X Luna shipping?
-i run the celestia X Luna shipping group, so i really want to know
2635821 Yeah, it does. Sorry for not replying.
2650505 it's ok, so i assume it focus on them? also it's clop right? (gotta categorize it)
i'm thinking the main clop folder, unless you personally think this would only partially be luna x celestia or think it would better fit being categorized as gore or dark.
2650555 It's starts off just Luna X Celestia, but moves into to some royal guard action, but yeah. Yes, it's clop. No grimdark or gore.
"I want you all to give Lulu here a number six."
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