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Trixie tries to get a story into the Foal Free Press. The CMC are not amused. But Trixie has a secret up her sleeve.
The Prompt was:
1000 words.
Start the story with a pony bursting into a building, shouting, "DID SOMEPONY ORDER A LARGE HAM?!" This is the result of that prompt
My attempt at speed writing.
written, edited, and published in 40 minutes.
A few later edits shown in red.
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Amazing, 10/10 Would read again just for that outta-nowhere twist! Worthy of M. Night Shamalan himself! Deserves an animated short!
It was pretty good, for what you were given.
But where did you get this prompt?
TvTropes, what have you done?
>if automatons build
built
>Sweetie Belle of course was
, of course,
>Like, your a
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>with tranquilizer dart
a
>Woah, woah, woah, hold on a minute," said Apple Bloom.
Woah, woah, woah, hold your horses," said Apple Bloom. <--MUST FIX IMMEDIATELY
>for you company
your
Overall, pretty fun for the two minutes it took, just like virgin sex.
3687858 I have not read it yet k
3687860
I am soiree, eh.
3687876 I am not exit
3687883
Ha
3687885 tee hatee hatee ho!
3687569 http://www.fimfiction.net/group/201217/promptaday
3687858 Thanks for pointing these out.
That was random, lol!
3688379 Yes, yes it was.
Not a half bad interpretation and use of the prompt itself. Rather than following through literally, you took it as an overall theme for the telling of the story.
We get enough of these, and I might have to blog a collection of 'em, heh. Good to see good work from the one that started it all.
A little too clever for its own good, methinks
3691004 This was the first time I've really tried speed writing a pony fic, and I quickly found that "too much" cleverness is a very cheap way to bump the word count when one is grasping for really ideas on the fly.
Loved it! So glad I decided to start reading some purely comic stories. I laughed sooooooo hard at the part that said
and
Honestly, do they know she's a robot??
3691142 Ahhh, that's the super secret prequel.
>>Super Trampoline Aha! I figured it out! I thought of something like that, but I thought of writing it myself. What do you think? Would it be good?
3691177 That depends vastly on the skills of the author. Good luck!
3691181 I don't know if I'm all that good. I used to publish my stuff on a different site, but I came here looking for a change of pace. I love it here! I'm hoping to just post stories that are here on here, and my stories that are on that other site on the other site. But I'm willing to give it a shot!
3691219 Also, you know that you can edit your comments rather than deleting them, right?
3691248 I know, I just forgot the number that was used for the reply thing after your username didn't work like it did before. It took a couple of tries
Wait a second...
It just changed it to your name on the last reply?
Well.
This is embarassing...
WHY DO I EVEN READ YOUR STORIES ANYMORE?!
Oh, nevermind.
4344710 because you
me. 
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6387243 Looking back, this is one of my tamer random stories. My latest, "Twilight Sparkle Drinks Tea" is toxic levels of WTF. actually since you love changelings, you should read my story with no title. It's one of my few good ones, and a lot of people liked it.
I can't believe that I never commented on this way back when.
Man. Seems so long ago . . . back when the Collab Cage was still a thing.