The Night will laugh forever!

by Jumpitydude

First night

Author's Note:

A story I wrote for the cover image over on Derpibooru. I fleshed it out a bit more, made it more of a story rather than the quick little one off I made over there. I hope you enjoy.

Luna trotted into the old castle. He said to be here, in the tallest tower, as soon as I can after sunset.

She looked around, trying to push the bad memories of this place out. She had to wonder why he chose this place over any other. Though she would later admit, she probably should have used more caution. Especially as she reached the top of the tower.

She glanced around the empty room, before turning to leave. Suddenly, she found her front hooves above and behind her head, and a gag in her mouth.

"Mmmff? Nnnngh!"

Her screams were well muffled as a laugh echoed around her.

I was tricked!

"Hello, Luna." Discord appeared from thin air before her, a wicked smile spread across his face. "I think you know very well what’s going on. I have just one question for you. Where are the Elements of Harmony?"

Luna was about to respond against him, but something clicked before she could. Or rather, couldn’t.

She was gagged.

Even if she wanted to scream it out at him, all that would come out were muffled noises. Slowly, the reality of the situation dawned on her; He didn’t want information, or the Elements.

He wanted her to suffer.

"You won’t tell me? Fine. I guess we have to do this the hard way." He snapped his finger, and a feather appeared in his claw, and a cuff appeared on Luna’s left hind hoof and tied itself to the ceiling. Her eyes went wide, as the feather approached her suddenly raised hoof, and his tail moved to the joint between her torso and left front leg.

She didn’t have a chance to struggle between when her hoof was lifted, leaving her balanced on just one hoof, and when he started the perilous torture.

She tried to pull away, but the ropes holding her were tight enough to prevent her from maneuvering enough to get any relief. All she could move was her head, which she lashed as much as she could.

"Nnnnggh! Nnnnnnnngh!"

Discord laughed at (with?) her. "Princess, I would have never imagined this would be so much fun! Mind telling me now, where the Elements of Harmony are?"

She let out another muffled scream, trying to tell him she would, but her message wouldn’t get through.

"You know…" His eyes narrowed with clear excitement. "The night is still young…" He moved his face inches from hers. "And I can make this more fun."

After pondering what he meant for a moment, Luna remembered when he first got hold of her and tortured her;

Celestia was right in front of her, and after she turned around and started towards them, she suddenly slowed to a speed that made a snail going up hill look like that comic character of recent times. (Filly-second? Yeah, that sounded right)

When she finally got halfway, she slowed to a crawl, before moving in reverse.

That’s when Discord explained what was happening. "We’re in a pocket dimension where time is at my beck and call. Forward. Backward. Fast. Slow. I get to do what I want with time in here. A second is an eternity."

It felt like she suffered for a million years before Celestia finally got to her.

"Oh, Luna." His voice brought her back to the present. "You should have spoken up by now."

I tried! Stop messing with me! At least stop pretending and let me laugh freely!

"Because now you have to deal with…" He snapped his fingers, and three objects appeared, all of which made Luna’s eyes widen. "… these."

The first was an object that looked to be a handle with self-moving hairs. She recalled that somepony called it an "electric brush."

The second was a collar that, in the past, had spread a magic ink that, wherever it spread, made her twice as sensitive. Something else she would like to forget.

The third was a can, no doubt filled with his most devious creation ever; a gas that forced anyone that inhaled it to relax their muscles, and made them push into any torture instead of pulling away by instinct.

Without halting the torture, he maneuvered the brush to her right side, the can in front of her face, and strapped the collar around her neck.

Her only thought as she breathed the gas was, Oh…

---

Celestia was cautious in her old castle, not just because of the traps, but also because she didn’t want Luna to see her.

Since Discord was reformed, the two had a tendency to slip off unnoticed. She glanced around.

She spoke under her breath. "If I wanted to do something private, where would I go?"

She looked around before looking through a hole in the ceiling.

At the tallest tower.

The most secluded place.

As she approached the top of the staircase, she overheard a sound. She took a careful glance and saw something that confirmed what she heard.

Discord and Luna. Cuddled up, and asleep.

She smiled, amazed how the two beings that once sought little more then a friend had found a life companion in each other.

She turned around and trotted down the stairs.

As soon as she reached the bottom, her mind snapped back to her body.

Front hooves above and behind her head, right hind hoof lifted as high as it could go, and a gag silencing her rather effectively.

What the-

"Did you think you could slip away that easily?"

Discord and Luna were both smiling at her in a sadistic way.

What are they up to? Are they trying to overthrow me?

"Oh, sister. If you wanted to join us, you only had to ask."

Join what? At least they aren't against me.

"So, Celly." Discord snapped his fingers, and a feather appeared in his claw. "Are you ticklish?"

Her eyes went wide. W-what? Tickling? That's what they were up to?

"Oh, she very much is." Luna was by her right side. "Trust me…"

She stretched her front hooves above her head, and restraints appeared, forcing Luna in a pose that mirrored Celestia’s.

"… it’s fun." A gag found it’s way into Luna’s mouth, as a couple of collars appeared and fastened around the sisters’ necks.

Oh, I know, Luna. I know.

While she would never admit it normally, she already knew how fun getting tickled was.

She first discovered her liking of the act after a fight. She lost, and as a result was tied up and tickled all over. When Discord released her at last, she had to consider why she was so excited at the thought of it happening again.

While she had been tickled a lot later, she never felt quite the same way. She had asked her guards to tickle her as much as possible, but was never close to satisfied.

Now that it was Discord again, perhaps...

Her blush could have meant a number of things, but her smile was hidden behind the gag.

For a brief moment, she was concerned about their royal duties. Then she remembered pawning off all such duties to Twilight. Twilight wouldn't complain about a chance to learn, especially about how to rule, and duties that come with royalty.

Discord snapped his fingers again, and a number of tickling tools appeared, including feathers, brushes, disembodied paws and claws, and even two cans that had his "Discord Patented True Torture Poison," one aimed at each of the sister’s faces.

"Oh, and did Lulu ever tell you about my pocket dimension?" Celestia raised an eyebrow.

Oh? Is this going to make my night better?

"No? Well, it’s a small area where I can control time in, with everything else unaffected." He leaned in close to her.

"And we’re in it right now."

Her widened eyes were probably taken as fear, rather than the excitement it actually was.

Comments

[Glowing Ember]

LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL

[Solar Pony]

uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuum

[Onlyicanhear]

Need better description on how celestia got "captured", but the rest seems a quite fun intro, will patiently wait for more

Who know, maybe twilight may become the guest of honour later...

[Jumpitydude]

3685221

Her mind snapped back into her body.

In other words, Discord messed with her mind, made her think she was leaving, and tied her up during that time.

3684972
3684711

I hope those are good things?

[Solar Pony]

3685411 uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuum

you don't want me to answer that

[Amber flicker]

*Waits for more*

[Jumpitydude]

3686706

If it has to do with a perverted mind...

... I've got one to.

Though if it's criticism, I'd be willing to listen.

[Solar Pony]

3686947 well i saw the word ball-gag so then i just thought: oh not this again

but either way i gave it a read and i now think you have a obsession with tickling

[jpff]

This needs a sequel.

[Jumpitydude]

3689594

Me? Obsessed with tickling? Whatever gave you that thought?

[Solar Pony]

3696797 ....... i really want to tickle you now

[Jumpitydude]

3698730

I'm a -ler, not a -lee.

Someone tries to tickle me, well, remember what Fluttershy did to Mane-iac's Hair Dryer Cannon?

[Solar Pony]

3699835 i did but don't worry my tickling skills are at level forty

[Jumpitydude]

3704464

Forty out of?

Oh, and who would you tickle of the mane 6?

[Solar Pony]

3705603 forty out of 10

as for your question..... hmmmmm...... rainbow dash

[Jumpitydude]

3705617

... I agree with tickling Rainbow Dash, but I'm just going to get back to writing.

[Solar Pony]

3705631 yeah i look forward to it

but can i give you some advice?

[Jumpitydude]

3705637
Yes?

[Solar Pony]

3707900 try not to use item of intercourse in a none clop fic because when i read this i had half a mind to leave and never come back

[Jumpitydude]

3707914

I never imagined anything like that in this story, but thinking about it, I can see how some of his "tools" can be used in such a way. I was more thinking along the lines of, at worst, a blade slightly piercing the skin and you pushing into it instead of away, or making something sting twice as bad as it would normally.

Uh, I'll try to watch out for that in the future.

[Solar Pony]

3710216 yeah i know the torture drill but...... yeah now you know it would be best to use a normal bag or a sock in the mouth because the sexual way is what ball gags were made for

[Jumpitydude]

3712417

THAT? That was your problem?

I said I based this story off of the image at the top! That image uses a ball gag! I'm sorry for staying true to the basis, but that's what I like to do!

[Solar Pony]

3712679 that's fine it's just i thought that you drew that pic yourself for this particular story

[Jumpitydude]

3712812
Eh, no worries. I'm not that good of an artist, and most of my art never finds its way to my computer.

[Solar Pony]

3715139 oh that explains it then

[Samsam1155]

do Cadence next

[Jumpitydude]

3929337

I'm not writing this right now, but we'll see what I do.

[Peaceofpie]

nope nope nope nope nope nope nope nope nope

[keam]

4135043
my thoughts exactly...

[EurekaStorm]

Tee-hee!

[Celestial Knight]

I love this.

Do you roleplay at all by chance. I'm sure you and I could come up with something deviously ticklish.

[Jumpitydude]

5535257

No. I'm just not interested in roleplaying.

[Celestial Knight]

5538017 Ah well.

If you're interested, I've done a few pony tickling stories on Furaffinity.

[Jumpitydude]

5539368

I'll be sure to check them out.

[PrincessAsparagus92]

Instant fave

[sociopath on the moon]

wait thats it!!?? o,o

[WinterStream]

Can you make a chapter 2?

[Jumpitydude]

9699813

I probably won't. If I do write more fetish stories, I'll probably start a new one. For now, though, I want to focus on my non-fetish stories.