Gore, Terror, Death, and the magic of friendship <3...or not...
I think you made the right choice with Luna, at least in my few. It's getting REALLY interesting just watch on capitalisation and some of the speech marks are out of place in some parts. Nothing major.
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Thank you :) I get so excited when writing that I'm afraid I won't get all my ideas down and I lack in capitalization and punctuation lol!!
Seems like its getting good! Keep doing what your doing, and remember, we're here for ya!
This is going great, keep up the good work. The grammar and spelling are fine, nothing too bad at any given point
I think you made the right choice with Luna, at least in my few. It's getting REALLY interesting just watch on capitalisation and some of the speech marks are out of place in some parts. Nothing major.
334634
Thank you :) I get so excited when writing that I'm afraid I won't get all my ideas down and I lack in capitalization and punctuation lol!!
Seems like its getting good! Keep doing what your doing, and remember, we're here for ya!
This is going great, keep up the good work. The grammar and spelling are fine, nothing too bad at any given point