cool shit

I feel like there isn't enough to describe the scene in some spots but I still think this is really good and I look forward to seeing more.

Hoo boy, if Celestia turns, the world is doomed. Short of releasing Discord, there won't be anyone powerful enough to stop her. Who know,s he might actually be able to be helpful in such a situation.

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Thanks! I've noticed that too. I tend to rush through some things. I'll do my best to be more descriptive.

Amazing. I can't wait to read more however one little note; "S-so that's all?" Fluttershy whispered. "Now what's going to happen." theres a question mark missing. That's all I can say abut it really! Well done