John Konner Doughe, or Konner, is your average male. Except for his odd eye color, which is black. However one day as he was coming home from school, a bright light flashed. When he awoke he found himself in Equestria. However, he unfortunately was here during one of the worst heat seasons yet, and it doesn't show any signs of relenting. Will he get out unmolested by the hordes of horny mares? Probably not since every stallion has gone into hiding far away. Or have they?
Thanks for the support I've gotten so far. I never really expected anyone to even look at this. Anyway, here's my first ever attempt to create a story for something other than school. Enjoy or not, leave your opinions in the comments. Thank you for all the favorites, over 13 now. It really means a lot to me. Also for the next chapters to come I'm going to need some OC. Any volunteers? Got all I need, now I just need an editor.
I think you may want to change your story image. Using an anime character...kinda sends a bad message.
lol this will be good, I wish the chapters were bigger though
I would like to be fucked by a bunch of ponies (I'm a guy so don't take it the wrong way)
3741030 Thanks, this is my first attempt at writing something bigger than a poem.
3740865 Thanks for the heads up, I'll look around.
Increase length of chapters
This was too fast of a read
I love it! Keep up the good work!
3741898 I'll do my best
3742076 Thanks for the support.
Are you John Connor?
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3742746 Actually no, John Dough is used by police as an unidentified, or anonymous, body. So John Doughe is a not so mixed up version and Konner is my middle name and the name I go by.
3742746 So no I'm not John Connor, I'm John Konner.
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It's John Doe.
3742908 It makes more sense as dough because dough is mold-able, allowing for many different shapes.
3742937
Well, isn't that unfortunate, because it's still Doe.
3742937
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/John_Doe
3742997
i find you amusing.
3743033 Fine whatever you win.
3742997 Sure whatever.
This chapter's pretty good! Apparently I'm stuck in the story now! Gotta go into hiding..... (hides in a cardboard box)
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Gets found out music plays
Snake SNAKE SNAAAAAAAKE!!!!
The end
Lol loving the story wish the chapters were longer but still good please don't stop!
Also just a thought but maybe you could have the mares find the safe house since more stallions means a stronger signal for the mares to track and maybe also bring in some of the mane 6 and have spike get saved as well that would be cool
3751396 Good ideas, but I already have the mane 6 planned to appear, I'll keep it in mind.
3751753 cool I'm glad to hear it makes me feel as if I contributed
Sorry for the long wait, chapter five is around half done, but it may take awhile seeing as I have school tomorrow.
Yeesh, talk about harsh rape. He COULD have ran away from dat laser form the elements, seems weird that yelled at them and ripped off his shirst all the while just standing there, weird.
3759860 Just wait you'll find out why.
3762941 Indeed!
lol love how you incorporated the mane 6 im also curious as to why he tore off his shirt plus that is so weird i fell bad that bic mac was raped BY HIS OWN SISTER WTF
also how can pinkie even be dirty a little bit its hard to understand 
<-- see that is pure innocence 
<-- that is not 
You sir, have left me on a cliffhanger on which I really dislike you for, but also I respect you for doing so. I do enjoy this writing of yours. Please continue this and may the king and queen of equestria be with you.
:3
3814937 Told you it would be explained. (Also, the elements beam was to large for him to avoid)
Dude your story isn't bad and no offense but your chapters are way too fucken short and you need a proofreader.
XD LEEEEEEERRRROOOOOYYYY JEEEEEENNNNNNKKKKIIINNNNSSSS
Bad Choice of words mate when celly showed up
3881626 Ah but you see what really happens is [static] luna [static] edn, and that's how it goes down.
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I completely agree
confusing but maybe it was supposed to be that way
Um...I think you need a [Random] tag for this story.
Make a bucking part 2 dude also eclipse is my oc in this story god I love luna
DUDE YOU CANT JUST END IT LIKE THAT IT NEEDS LIKE AT LEAST ONE MORE CHAPTER PLEASE DONT END IT LIKE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!
3930373 Sequel awaiting approval.
Bananas smell like cats on the poptort boxx eating the lamps
The bannana king ate my mothers cat the farted in my face rchdjcg jg cfjg bdcgugvd
OH no the banna kings eating my arms at the same time as murdering my face HELP ME PLEASE!
My arms aare weak my face is dying and I might not make it tell pinkie I ,llove her
My face is dead my arms are now turned into bananas I am not living anymore my balls have turned into plums goodbye
He was a good man the banana kings going to pay for murdering his face!
I murdered all their faces
Not the best written fanfic I've read, but it still got a few chuckles from me.
3936200 Well I didn't expect it to be amazing, it was my first story that I didn't get babied through. Also, in the immortal words of my lord and savior, Sargent A. J. Johnson, "I know what the ladies like."