Rafael Gibson was a man, that like all of use, tried to find his place in the world. That until he lost everything, his home, his family and his dreams. and now that he lost everything, he will learn that there is always hope in the end.
"Rainbow, it's true that you hurt him but I think that Rafael will forgive you. I mean you did apologize and never in Equestria history somepony held a grudge, because there is always a happy ending, maybe today he is angry, but some day, if you give him more time I'm sure he will forgive you, now if you excuse me I have a party to plan.
you have two of the same sentence
great story so far
4054207 thanks man, and i fix the sentence.