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This story is a sequel to The Doctor Whooves Chronicles Episode 5: Prisoners of War
It's been a month since the return of the Twilight King, Dusk. Twilight is still his captive and the Doctor, Derpy, and Marcus have taken refuge on Ruleo to gain backup in their plan to infiltrate the new land of twilight. But there is more waiting for the Doctor and his friends beyond the twilight curtain than just an evil, powerful tyrant.
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That's what the Daleks call him!
So now this is back. I was curious about the next installment of this since the last one ended with a cliffhanger. Still it's a nice intermission after the awesome ending of "The Rifts". Looking forward to seeing how the Doctor and Derpy save Twilight and defeat King Dusk. As always, keep up the good work.
YES!!! Been waiting foe this for ages
Dun, dun, DDUUNN!! Watch out, you're about to get DESTROYED!
I know I have seen the beginning before...
Did you by any chance get the beginning from Legend of Zelda: Twilight Princess
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I'd be lying if I said that Zelda: Twilight Princess didn't act as inspiration for certain aspects of Dusk's land of twilight.
Three words. What. The. HECK?!?!?
What in the loopty-loop are you doing?! Are seriously stealing ideas from Japanese horror movies/stories?!? In any case, this was extremely well written, but I found myself creeped out by those ghosts. Hope this story turns out well.
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Actually, the ghosts in this story weren't inspired by any sort of Japanese movies or stories. They were just...ghosts.
Although I do watch a lot of Japanese ghost stories and horror films so I'm not surprised if I end up unintentionally writing ghosts in a Japanese style (which I guess isn't a really bad thing as the Japanese are known as the masters of horror).
That's a reference "Day of the Doctor" isn't it?
I agree with the Doctor. Things have become much more interesting.
Considering that The Doctor has faced The Daleks, Davros, The Master, Rassillon, The Nightmare Child and his armies of menwas and never-weres, The Beast, The Silence, The Sontarans,etc, this is just another usual day for The Doctor AKA The Oncoming Storm
My best guess for this new guy is Ash or President Targaryen.
"But you're not going anywhere, you just wandering about" Quoted from Clara Oswald
This is the prof :
3730214 Hmm I vote for Col. Ash
Wait. Isn't Sylvia a Nymphadoran?
The creature attacking the ship kind of reminds me of what happened in the episode "Midnight". I don't know if that's intentional since takes place in a place called "Twilight".
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No, Sylvia's always been an Auranian.
This is not looking good. Hope the Doc. finds a way to fix this.
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I wouldn't worry about that. The Doctor always finds a way to fix things, even if he has to die in the process. fc06.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2012/364/d/1/clapping_pony_icon___time_turner_by_travispony-d5pob3v.gif
--Sollace
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Him dying in the process is exactlly what I'm afraid of since it almost happens all the time throughout the franchise.
Ah there the Doctor goes again.
Ha! I totally called it. Ash was the new ghost Twilight saw.
I like how the Doctor's guilt induced fear that something will happen to Derpy as his companion. He is the one who regrets after all.
I can't help imagining Dusk sounding like the Shredder from the new Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles.
I think you mean Ash.
Oh my gosh! What's happening to Twilight!
Let me guess. That ancient magic and wisps of light is that dude who first imprisoned Dusk in the first place.
Another great installment. Keep up the good work. 
Oh dear, oh dear, what have we here?
The wandering wanderer wondering where to go.
Dude, allow me to congratulate you on this excellent chapter. You captured the essence od the 10th Doctor so well in that last part of the chapter in the hole!
After some time not reading your stories I translate that to 1678 A.D
(C.E(common era)=A.D)
You know Twilight does have a point.
With all the running, sorries, and hatred of pears, I find myself reminded here how good you are at capturing the 10th Doctor. In know the Doctor in your other Doctor Whooves series is heavily based on the 10th Doctor, but you kind of do you're own thing with him. Naturally, given in that story he's the Doctor's 11th (or rather 13th given The Time of the Doctor, right) regeneration. Anyway, this was a good run up to the epic showdown with Dusk that I sense is coming. Keep up the good work.
Wait a minute, so King Dusk is transforming Nyphadora into something like this?
Luna's stars this updated. I gasped for about ten seconds when I saw this.
It feels good to be back reading your Doctor Whooves stories.
Oh my gosh. That's a reference to Sweet Apple Anthology!
I sense we are fast approaching the epic climax. I really look forward to it. Keep up the good work.
Can someone say "Epic!" loud enough to give that scene credit?! I honestly had shivers run down my spine while I read their speech. That amazing speech!
But still... Called it. It was pretty obvious that the Dawn would return and give Dusk hell. Uh... again. Not that that made it any less breath-taking of course.
Is it weird that the first thing that came to mind when I read this was Lorelei from Tales of the Abyss? ...Okay, scratch that, even with your description of how the Dawn looked Lorelei is still the only thing that fits the image you crafted of him. In my opinion at least.
This little girl. I don't even know what it is about her, but every single action of hers warms my heart. It's a shame we have to say goodbye to her
To sum up, I loved this chapter a whole fricking lot. Can't wait for the wrapping-up of this great ride of pure awesome!
I think you mean "You still live" or "You're still alive".
Like a portkey.
Well, that was quite a thrilling climax. Though it had to end with a cliffhanger.
Can't wait for the conclusion. Keep up the good work. 
Awww, I'm gonna miss Twilight...
And Carrot op reminds me of a mix between Jackie and Amy. I'm honestly not sure how to feel about that...
Love the ending of this month that never was! It was a bumpy ride of humor, drama and epicness and I can't wait for the next installment!
Well that ending was quite unexpected.
That's exactly what I was thinking. This is just like the end of The Last of the Time Lords.
Seems Celestia's knows of the Doctor's adventures.
So it seems Twilight won't be joining the Doctor and Derpy on their adventures. But if I recall the list of episodes for the subsequent "seasons" of DWC, it seems Twilight will eventually be joining the Doctor again.
The ending here also kind of reminded me of "The Doctor, the Widow, and the Wardrobe".
Well, that's finally the end of that. Felt like it took a long time to tell this story. Anyway, let's see what comes next.
Keep up the good work. 
And now, we wait for book 7.
I'm about ready to pass out..
..Yet, I will be waiting...
..Waiting...
There mus...Be more...
Surely I hate this story and the chronicles series as well but somehow I still read it
Now, these last two chapter certainly change my mind form this:
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To this:
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Can't wait for the sequel and DON'T YOU DARE TO DISAPPOINT ME AGAIN!
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I'm glad I was able to exceed your expectations with this story. Hopefully, you'll enjoy what's to come.
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I will if this redneck called Uberdeathninja not keep pestering me!
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What have they been doing?
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I got into some sort of a... flame war(?) with them
wait twilights not coming? And Derpy is staying? YYYYYYYYAAAAAAAAAAAYYYY!
y u no make more
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I'll continue writing this series once I've completed the finale of the first "season" of my main DW series (which I hope to finish at least before I die
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He was going to send that demon back to the hell he had been born from.
bad word dr dont use bad words (my little sisters advice)
How long will it be before her breath is finally snuffed out of her miserable, weak, defeated co-
might i ask what word was about to be sppked id like to know
And then!.......... episode 7 was never released! When is it coming out??? It's been 3 years!
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Sorry but I (through painful consideration) decided to put a close on this secondary series. I explained why in this blog post.