that ok and are you going put this as complete not incomplete and i like it

Sorry my authors note is weird my computer was being a fucktard.

3681633 that ok and are going to put it as complete for this story

New story name ? I liked this one .

I'm a just lay down here and...cry!

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That's good?

What's in the secret door?

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I know what you mean, I was going to write another Scootaloo story where she has alibis family and stuff, but let me be honest. It's so hard for me to wire happy things. I love the dark morbid tales. And I hope the majority of people who read this story do to!

*A loving family

a few misspelings but i give it a 7.75 on writing however for darkness scale it's a 2 at best. i have high standerds. still loved it though!

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Glad you liked it. And sorry for my errors, I write this on my iPod, so naturally auto-correct either doesn't do it's job or does its job too good. I also like the feed back ill try harder with my next story!

4433801 No prob I still loved it though.

What's the secret door?????

I love dark Scootaloo storirs sooo much! Got a like from me :D lol great story though.

good story, realistic, but had a good ending. though i was dissapointed in not seeing her father and caramel flayed alive on a salted pike

Well, it had quite a few grammatical mistakes, but except for that it was a beautiful story. I really wish that Caramel and Cold Heart (seriously?) should have died in the end, but it's not my fic. If it was my fic, I would've had either Sweetie Belle or Applebloom brutally murder them. But then again, it's not MY fic.

Just beautiful.

4797961 IKR?!

To be honest I kind of feel it came to an end to fast. One minute she was in the hospital and then living with Dash. I really didn't feel there was any real closure to the situation. I guess I would have been happier if Dash laied the law down her self, or Luna came in and stumped their heads flat in an act of divine judgment.

i don't think she hurt that much if she can just pumped out next batch of foals this quick.
and 3 kids? definitely an upper middle class at least.