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regierock

regierock #1 · Mar 1st, 2014 · · · Prologue ·

I love the plot it is very interesting and i loved it that fluttershy was her sister! poor smolder

helphappy

helphappy #2 · Mar 2nd, 2014 · · · Prologue ·

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I'm so happy this meany people liked it! It really makes my day. Especially this comment, I didn't think it was going to be Fluttershy at first I wanted it to be Dash but one thing led to another them Boom! But I do like the fact that I pleased somebody.

Texus

Texus #3 · May 1st, 2014 · · · Prologue ·

Well i think i would hate it if i know the true, but is Smoulder i mean had someone rape her? This or they just beat her up pretty hard.
I like the story, i just hate rape things if i hear them in Movies or court shows

I don´t understand why they have to shackle her, i mean do they think she is something bad? If they do not think she do something bad than why schakle her like that? Maybe i just understand it wrong.

helphappy

helphappy #4 · May 23rd, 2014 · · · Update 1 ·

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Smoulder has anger issues, I will tell more about it later. She was also hurt quite badly and to prevent her from moving around too much they strapped her down. And no, she wasn't raped I promise. That stallion just really likes hurting her.