[Older story, read with a grain of salt]
She has fought it for weeks...the magic that for years has been a benevolent presence inside her, but that has grown since her transformation from unicorn to alicorn, and that is now threatening to take her over.
She cannot resist any longer.
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For a minute there, I was wondering how it would end.......and Pinkie Pie. Because Pinkie Pie.
I rather like this little fiction.
But tell me, why was Twilight's magic evil? 
How does that happen?
I quite liked this short fanfic. Its interesting.
3646901
well you see good sir I think I can help him explain this.
You see Twilight and her friends (well mostly her) have been fighting evil villains,monster and changelings. She being a element of magic has already have amazing powers. She may have over use the break and the other evil people she has been fighting and done evils spells on her and when she over use her magic she just broke down and died.
This is what i think BTW
How do i accurately express how i feel, here? Let's see...
Whoa, only the first, I mean second day of it being visible and this many comments! :D Join reply imminent! I mean right now! I mean...whatever.
3646804 Haha :D
3646901 'Twas just a random idea I had that was inspired by Creamandcheese1's art. I didn't really think that far XD
3647045 Thanks! :D
3647316 Thanks! :) Glad you liked it.
3647374 I uphold thy idea. The fact that Twiley's used dark magic in the past would make sense leading up to this.
3651188 haha :D
3651758 At first I was all
then I was 'PINKIE PIE: YOUR ARGUMENT IS INVALID' 
You'd think that she might, i don't know... ask Princess Celestia for help?
3651764 lol :D
3652118 She didn't want to worry Celestia. Which was her undoing.
3682649 lol
3739924 Her magic. It was growing inside her and taking on a mind of its own.
3769988 That's up to the reader. :3
The end ruined it for me. If you had left it at "And every one of them knew, too, what it was to be free," you would have been perfectly fine.
4243689 To each his own, I suppose! XD!
3651758 For one thing, I am readily accepting 'Andromeda' as personal headcanon for Twilight's middle name. It just fits.
For another thing, I have my own perceptions as to why Twilight's magic would be so wild. If you would humour me...
Magic, at its heart, is chaos. It's like the storm it brought on, wild, unchecked, and free. Magic itself is only magic when it is funneled and used.
Working on the premise that Twilight is still newly ascended, one can easily say that Twilight has a metric fuckton, for lack of an academic term, of magic that is still wild and untamed. Think of a balloon being inflated inside a birdcage, where the balloon is made of a tough fabric like, say, vinyl, and the cage is made of sticks. It needs to be channelled and focused, but, in the fic, Twilight is no longer studying under Celestia. That point in the fic got me thinking about this theory. As a newly crowned Princess, Twilight still needs to undergo many lessons on how to keep her magic in check, work in harmony with it, to guide it in such a way that it could be properly vented and regulated so as to prevent such an instance of this fic even happening. Without the proper guidance, well...yeah.
I better stop rambling before I lose track of myself and bore you at the same time. For wasting your time, have an upvote and a fave.
6448244 Holy crap, I never saw your comment O__O This being an old story I almost didn't even remember what I'd written about lol :P VERY good job explaining the premise, in fact I think you explained it better than I did ^^