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Something little can end up meaning so much to a pony, just as one little moment can lead to a whole new situation. Big Macintosh and Twilight Sparkle realize that, all thanks to a little doll.

(Fanfiction inspired by the crazy events of Lesson Zero. This is a story idea that would just NOT let me sleep until I had written it out.)

Note: This story has been cross-posted to Fanfiction.net under the same pen name, and to my Deviantart under the pen name "Quarkonia."

First Published
16th Oct 2011
Last Modified
16th Oct 2011
#1 · 162w, 1d ago · · ·

Awwwwwww...... it so cute.:eeyup::twilightsmile:

#2 · 162w, 1d ago · · ·

One of the most heart warming stories I've seen on here :) You've done a wonderful job, and the interaction between the 'toys' felt right for Twi and Big Mac :)

5*

#3 · 162w, 1d ago · · ·

aww kawaii desu

#4 · 162w, 1d ago · · ·

As soon as I saw the episode this morning I was waiting for someone to write a fic about Big Mac and the doll. This story was so cute and exactly what I was hoping for! :twilightsmile:

#5 · 162w, 1d ago · · ·

Loved it, it made me smile, awesome job by the way :pinkiehappy:

#6 · 162w, 1d ago · · ·

sweet little fic here it certainly seems to fit both characters I think.

#7 · 162w, 1d ago · · ·

win, just win. Very well done, author.

#8 · 162w, 1d ago · · ·

excellent

#9 · 162w, 1d ago · · ·

Awww, that was sweet :twilightblush::eeyup:

This fic cheered me up immensely. I was having a pretty grim day up until now. Thanks, author. :twilightsmile:

#10 · 162w, 1d ago · · ·

this is adorable in ever sense of the word, hope you keep the story going. :twilightsmile::eeyup:

#11 · 162w, 1d ago · · ·

Wow, that was fast.

#12 · 162w, 1d ago · · ·

Can't... take it anymore... HNNNNNNNNNG!:twilightsmile::eeyup:

#13 · 162w, 1d ago · · ·

SQUEEEEEEEEEE!  That was so adorable!  I just adore this pairing.  :twilightsmile::eeyup:

#14 · 162w, 1d ago · · ·

My GOD! This community works quick.

#15 · 162w, 23h ago · · ·

Okay, this story is just amazing, plain and simple. Beautiful and genuinely touching, without a doubt one of the best fics I've ever read.:twilightsmile:

#16 · 162w, 22h ago · · ·

Set Dawwwwww factor to Eleven!

#17 · 162w, 9h ago · · ·

This is a very interesting way to start a romance between Big Mac and Twilight. I figured shipping would ensue because of the doll, but not this quickly. I'm tracking this story and giving a high rating for good measure; keep up the good work!:twilightsmile:

#18 · 162w, 8h ago · · ·

In the words of Optimus Prime, "By the All Spark, that is just fucking precious."

#19 · 161w, 6d ago · · ·

Tracked...even though it's complete.

#20 · 161w, 6d ago · · ·

D'aww... :twilightblush::eeyup:

This was a beautiful little drabble. Thank you. It's going on my favorites.

#21 · 161w, 4d ago · · ·

Thank you all so much. :twilightsmile: :eeyup: :heart:

#22 · 157w, 6d ago · · ·

They're both so...ADORKABLE. :heart:

#23 · 154w, 5d ago · · ·

Cute!

"I shall call him....Mini Me!"

#24 · 153w, 4d ago · · ·

My brain is full of D'AAWWWW. :heart:

:heart:

Millions and millions of D'AAWWWW!!!!!

#25 · 152w, 2d ago · · ·

Multi-chapter story or at least a sequel. Sir! I will give you a million dollars for such a continuation!!

#26 · 150w, 1d ago · · ·

I don't do this often, if ever. But right after I finished this I went D'AWWWWW out loud.

That was flipping adorable, and such a unique way for them to come out about their feelings towards one another.

#27 · 147w, 3d ago · · ·

Nooooo I accidentally hit 4.5 stars instead of 5 :fluttercry:

I really loved it, it's short and very very sweet

#28 · 143w, 5d ago · · ·

Awww, that is so lovely! :pinkiesmile:

#29 · 143w, 4d ago · · ·

Argh, why didn't you write more? This was so sweet and romantic! :twilightsmile:

#30 · 143w, 4d ago · · ·

30th! um..........Very cute:eeyup::twilightblush::twilightsmile::pinkiehappy::yay:

#31 · 140w, 3d ago · · ·

ಥ_ಥ this was brill thank you:rainbowlaugh::rainbowkiss:

#32 · 137w, 1d ago · 2 · ·

Lovely.:twilightsmile::eeyup::twilightsmile: Now, if you'll excuse me, I must go have a heart attack from the excessive cuteness.

#33 · 70w, 1d ago · · ·

This was the very first TwiMac story I ever read...a long time ago on Deviantart. It was so well written I had to favorite it, and begun thinking of the possibility of Twilight and Macintosh as a couple. I realized how well they fit together, personality-wise, and have been devoted to the pairing ever sense

I deeply apologize for taking this long to think of tracking it down on this website :fluttershysad: but it's now favorited, as it should be :twilightsmile:

This shall always be among my favorite TwiMac stories, thank you for introducing me to this adorable couple :twilightsmile::eeyup::yay:

#34 · 3w, 6d ago · · ·

Seven people apparently caught diabetes from this story and have shown their displeasure as such...

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