You are the most talented, most interesting, and most extraordinary person in the universe. And you are capable of amazing things. Because you are the reader. And you bring our worlds to life.
Long ago, the three races lived together in perfect harmony.
But then everything changed when the Pegasi attacked.
Only the Alicorn, a combination of all three races could stop them.
But when the world needed them most, they vanished.
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A thousand years passed, and Rarity and Applejack discovered the new Alicorn,
A Unicorn named Twilight.
And although her magic skills are great, she had as lot to learn before she can ascend.
But they believe, Twilight can save the world.
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Is it me, or is the description almost an exact replica of the "Avatar: The Last Airbender" opening credits story?
@DiscordedWhovian - That's intentional, it looks like.
You do have a teeny bit of run-on sentences, which make it feel like its going a bit too fast. Other than that, I'm excited to see where this is going! I very much like that Unicorns are Princesses, and I'm eager to hear about how Earth is. Are the Pegasi trying to rule the world, or is it the Unicorns? Can't wait to see the rest of the Mane Six and their parts!
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If you quote them, I'll try to reword them. Also I'm aware of the ones in the blurb, it was the best I could do
While I'll be trying to even it out and not reveal too much history at once, essentially it's based on the play that was in that mlp episode. You know, Princess Platinum, Commander Hurricane, Empress Puddinghead.
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As above says, that is intentional. It's not an exact replica. For one they say 4 elements, not 3 races.
this chapter i like it another
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Ok, but then I really have to work on Blue.
Funny. Yesterday my friend and I were talking about Avatar, then this pops up.
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Blame me watching all 3 books.
3630437 Dis is gonna be long, aint it?
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Exellent. I must say, this is an interesting concept that I've always wanted to pursue. Because I know I'm not the only one who made the Twilight Sparkle avatar mode connection XD
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mind if I do simple spell checks for future chapters
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Go right ahead
Are you going to keep updating this story
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Maybe, I don't really feel like writing right now.
Your trying to convince to me that Pegasi are a threat? Stop just stop, your making pee from laughter!