Rather long name... eh? My name is DrillMax4 for short. I write various stories from Hitchcockinspired-LoveyDovey stories-YouTuberxPony-YouxPony. So come on in to my lair, and discover what shall be.
What happens when you overuse medication? Besides the obvious overdose, what happens? The opponent the medicine was fighting grows immune, and this is the case with what happened when you try to treat illnesses with magic for generations? Good job.
After failing his mark of mastery exam to be a Keyblade Master, Sora must continue his training on his own. Unfortunately, he crashes into the world of Equestria, and his friends don't know he's stranded in this far off world.
[YouxDerpy] Jealousy kills. You out of everyone knows this, espiecally the mare of your dreams sharing a house with you... no... she's a roommate,. A mare with a boyfriend would you rather. It's cold when she gives you the hoof, and you ign
This story has potential. If you look past the occasional misspelling, it's not that bad.
The only flaw I saw about this story in the first chapter is Kootra probably knows about the Brony fandom and the show, so I think he wouldn't react the way he did upon seeing the "horses." I'm sure he has an idea of what the ponies in the show looks like.
I'm keeping an eye on this story, 'cause like I said, this story has potential.
3624616 First human insinct is to be afraid when something unusual happens, So Jordan suffered from Panic since he is only human.
(Not to mention, in the MLP universe, Human emotion grows two-fold. say if Nova was to rage in the universe we are standing in.. He would have his normal, verbal abuse to Aleks or anyone else.
In the MLP universe he'd be sweearing a lot more than usual, his anger would be doubled.
Same with Seamus's sarcastic sense of humor. He would crack a few wise-guy-jokes more than he usually does. and he'll complain a lot more.
i just can't wait till nova appears i hope he will be random and raging a lot
3624298 I'm not saying he'll destroy something...
But he's gonna.... and someone is going to be PISSED!
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are you going to ship more of the creatures or just kootra
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Maybe, Maybe,
(Not going to tell you WHOM! MUHAHAHHAHAA... Oh I made myself more work )
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i hope you ship nova it will be so funny seeing him in a relationship
(but who would be best mare for him -_-)
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(I'm not revealing another damn thing. Until i get ten likes. I'll give you all hints....
(HINTS!)
This story has potential. If you look past the occasional misspelling, it's not that bad.
The only flaw I saw about this story in the first chapter is Kootra probably knows about the Brony fandom and the show, so I think he wouldn't react the way he did upon seeing the "horses." I'm sure he has an idea of what the ponies in the show looks like.
I'm keeping an eye on this story, 'cause like I said, this story has potential.
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First human insinct is to be afraid when something unusual happens, So Jordan suffered from Panic since he is only human.
(Not to mention, in the MLP universe, Human emotion grows two-fold. say if Nova was to rage in the universe we are standing in.. He would have his normal, verbal abuse to Aleks or anyone else.
In the MLP universe he'd be sweearing a lot more than usual, his anger would be doubled.
Same with Seamus's sarcastic sense of humor. He would crack a few wise-guy-jokes more than he usually does. and he'll complain a lot more.
3624647 Oh yeah...I forgot to take the panic and shock into account, my bad.
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A I said, he is/we are only human.
3624849 You need a proof-reader... I see a lot of spelling mistakes, and it takes out of the story.
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As I said, I am looking for an editor, In fact I just requested one right now.
will the next chapter be soon i want to get to see nova :3
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Friday Afternoon.
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i'll Be there
still no update
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I got grounded, still finishing up, Trying to ease my best friend from a horrible sickness.
Hold tight, this afternoon.
I am still waiting