i just can't wait till nova appears i hope he will be random and raging a lot

3624298 I'm not saying he'll destroy something...

But he's gonna.... and someone is going to be PISSED!

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are you going to ship more of the creatures or just kootra

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Maybe, Maybe,

(Not going to tell you WHOM! MUHAHAHHAHAA... Oh I made myself more work )

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i hope you ship nova it will be so funny seeing him in a relationship
(but who would be best mare for him -_-)

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(I'm not revealing another damn thing. Until i get ten likes. I'll give you all hints....

(HINTS!)

This story has potential. If you look past the occasional misspelling, it's not that bad.

The only flaw I saw about this story in the first chapter is Kootra probably knows about the Brony fandom and the show, so I think he wouldn't react the way he did upon seeing the "horses." I'm sure he has an idea of what the ponies in the show looks like.

I'm keeping an eye on this story, 'cause like I said, this story has potential.

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First human insinct is to be afraid when something unusual happens, So Jordan suffered from Panic since he is only human.

(Not to mention, in the MLP universe, Human emotion grows two-fold. say if Nova was to rage in the universe we are standing in.. He would have his normal, verbal abuse to Aleks or anyone else.

In the MLP universe he'd be sweearing a lot more than usual, his anger would be doubled.

Same with Seamus's sarcastic sense of humor. He would crack a few wise-guy-jokes more than he usually does. and he'll complain a lot more.

3624647 Oh yeah...I forgot to take the panic and shock into account, my bad.