My Little Pony: Relaxing Day

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ShadowNinja27

ShadowNinja27 #1 · Dec 13th, 2013 · · ·

Love it!

Synesisbassist

Synesisbassist #2 · Dec 13th, 2013 · 1 · ·

3622126 Thanks for my very first comment on this site! I was drawn to this site for a while, but never decided to post my stories here until recently. I have an account on Fanfiction under the same name Synessisbassist, so if you want more, check there! I might move some stories here, but not my longest story, it's waaaay to long for that. (At a little over 167,000 words) But I do plan to post my newer stories that I start here as well. But again thanks

ShadowNinja27

ShadowNinja27 #3 · Dec 13th, 2013 · · ·

3622143 heh np. I must say this is a very good Twidash story, not too many out there that are this good.

Paradox949

Paradox949 #4 · Dec 14th, 2013 · · ·

A few grammatical errors and misuse of certain words. It was also very fast paced for a crush-to-sex story (as a lot of clop is), but decent nonetheless. In some parts they felt OOC, but for the majority of it they seemed IC enough.
Get a proofreader/editor or something and you'll do well.

Synesisbassist

Synesisbassist #5 · Dec 14th, 2013 · · ·

3625418 Yes, I do need an editor, I will say that. Hell, one of my stories I posted last night, came to... Unexpected reactions, so much that I have decided to remove it. But this was meant as a little clop fic that someone requested and I just wrote what came to mind. But again, thanks!